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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

Daizy Brandon 2008.07.20 - 04:41PM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Great building of suspense. You are also very in tune with Severus's true emotions. Nice work. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yes, well, my betas keep my feet firmly on the ground and Severus in canon character, so my thanks goes to them!

Daizy Brandon 2008.07.20 - 04:30PM 10: Part of the Plan Signed
funnily, I was wondering about the sword at the same time that Severus was. . . I guess we shall find out together.

Author's Response: All in good time...

Daizy Brandon 2008.07.20 - 04:16PM 9: A New Memory Signed
Oh, the sweetness of the "close your eyes" plea. The tension mounts. . . Loving your creativity, and the picture you are painting in the cottage and the garden.

Author's Response: Yes, I shuddered when I wrote it :-D Sweet dreams...

johnbly341 2008.07.19 - 09:35PM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Outstanding story! I just "discovered" your story yesterday and have read it pretty much straight through. I normally don't like OC stories but you've definitely hooked me with this one. Excellent job with your characterization of Snape and, as someone else said, I'm really enjoying his perceptions of canon events. I can't wait for your next chapeter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed. I know what you mean about OC stories; I've deliberately tried to avoid some of the common pitfalls. Looks like my strategy has worked for you! Glad to have you along for the ride.

greenwood 2008.07.18 - 10:40PM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Really good chapter! The ending, with the Muggle studies teacher being executed was really well done. You captured cannon and added what we (Snape fans) wanted to hear behind the scenes - that is - what Severus was feeling and thinking. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I really enjoyed exploring Severus's thoughts and feelings in this canon situation. It is a testament to JKR's craftsmanship that the scene could be turned on its head to allow this interpretation. Glad you enjoyed it!

Rose of the West 2008.07.18 - 11:09AM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
It's nice to see this scene from Snape's POV. It never occured to me before, but it's interesting that Charity thinks Severus might help her, only weeks after he's killed Dumbledore.

Author's Response: Yes, and interesting that she doesn't expect help from Draco. Possibly due to a rush of blood to the head!

Rose of the West 2008.07.15 - 02:32PM 10: Part of the Plan Signed
Nice mix of cannon and AU elements. This is shaping up well.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's a good sign.

tigerlily2 2008.07.06 - 01:30AM 9: A New Memory Signed
Very nice! Thank you for posting this story. I wish this site had an update feature (to email people when something is updated). Thanks again!

Author's Response: Cheers! If you want to send me an email address, I would be happy to email you each time I add a chapter.

Rose of the West 2008.07.01 - 11:48AM 9: A New Memory Signed
I'm loving this story. I hope you continue it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement. Next chapter is on its way.

Muse22 2008.06.27 - 02:59PM 9: A New Memory Signed
Oh wow. I could just visualize that part. It gave me shivers, imagining Alan-as-Snape being that close.....Sorry, drifted there for a moment. ;) Great chapter.

Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, I admit I wrote that deliberately for the Rickmaniacs. It's hard to keep things platonic when that velvety voice is whispering in your ear...

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