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Reviews for The Moment It Began

kittylefish 2008.06.16 - 01:39PM 12: Chapter Twelve Signed
it was so sad watching him take his mother to the hospital, even though it was necessary. this story is definitely bittersweet at the moment. i do hope he manages to make things turn out better this time. the last sentence seemed kind of hopeful.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, this is a sad moment and time in their lives.

morgaine_dulac 2008.06.13 - 03:23PM 12: Chapter Twelve Signed
The last paragraph actually made me sniffle a little. It's very simple and at the same time very beautiful. And I know that I am a terribly cynic person, but I still have the feeling that something bad is about to happen and the there just won't be a happy ending. Please, prove me wrong. Thanks for sharing. /M

Author's Response: Thank you! Aw, I'm sorry it made you a bit sad! :(

morgaine_dulac 2008.06.11 - 04:02PM 11: Chapter Eleven Signed
For lack of a better word: sweet. In most Eileen-Severus stories, their relationship is quite frosty, but there is so much affection in yours. I love your Severus, he is so caring. Thanks for sharing. /M

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked it!

tigerlily2 2008.06.11 - 12:19AM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
Poor Severus. I'm glad she said she was sorry at the end of the chapter. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

kittylefish 2008.06.08 - 09:58PM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
i just caught up with the last two chapters. while there is clearly a tough road ahead, i liked that this chapter ended on a hopeful note.

Author's Response: Thanks!

morgaine_dulac 2008.06.07 - 02:13PM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
You know, I've never liked canon-Lily. I've always felt that she let Severus down when he needed her the most. But I really like YOUR Lily, very much. And I hope you'll update soon. Thanks for sharing. /M

Author's Response: Thank you! I always wanted Lily to stick my Severus's side.

tigerlily2 2008.06.07 - 03:19AM 9: Chapter Nine Signed
Good update! Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: You're welcome!

MW Waters 2008.05.30 - 02:48PM 8: Chapter Eight Signed
Great sotry so far! Keep writing, please!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

tigerlily2 2008.05.16 - 02:04AM 8: Chapter Eight Signed
Very good again. I have a bad feeling that Tobias isn't out of the picture yet though. Uh oh. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, and yes, Tobias will return.

kittylefish 2008.05.15 - 02:18PM 8: Chapter Eight Signed
well, at least he knows he has to tell lily what's going on if he wants things to be different. and i liked the image of her being his sunshine and not wanting to burn her out. thanks for updating so quickly!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Glad you liked it!

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