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Reviews for To Do All in my Power

tigerlily2 2008.04.06 - 01:42AM 5: Beautiful as the Moon: Breath and Water Signed
Whew! Wow, I guess the potion works. Poor Snape. Thanks again!!!!

Author's Response: So it would appear.... Actually, I wish I had the full recipe; I'm quite sure I'd benefit from taking it myself. On the other hand, I haven't Snape's courage, so perhaps it's as well I haven't the opportunity!

crowtato 2008.04.05 - 10:44AM 5: Beautiful as the Moon: Breath and Water Signed
Twisted! (as in "Compelling!"...if I can mean it that way.) Your writing has been so rich--the scientific philosophy side (or the philosophical science side?)--either way, I'm usually too lazy to read fic very closely, but this has been thought-provoking. In your latest chapter, I think I expected Snape's cynicism to be more resilient, but even considering how justified/"rational" it might be with all the childhood horrors, I guess the self-deception is pretty blatant--especially in the face of Lily. (And I think you do an excellent job of conveying a persistently misanthropic Snape to the end, where he could still care less for anyone but Lily...unless I'm deceiving myself?) Anyway, that realization in his dream is downright intriguing--three cheers for your writing, and Snape's potion skills. (It's almost like watching him punching himself in the head, and being miserable afterward--but you put it more eloquently. Poor Sev. He should've seen it coming...) I'll stop rambling--keep up the good stuff!

Author's Response: Thanks for your enthusiasm! I'm very curious how you'll respond to my next 2 chapters--it's gonna get worse, and you may find yourself disagreeing with what I think he needs to learn about himself. Punching himself in the head, yes indeedy! Ah, the advantage of being a cynic.




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