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| viaversipellis | 2012.11.19 - 09:30PM | 7: Knockturn Alley | Signed |
| This is a fantastic fic and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. You're doing a fantastic job keeping it true to the canon wizarding world and that's something not often enough seen. You're very skilled at writing Snape and I'm glad to see your OCs have their own personalities. I don't have much of a tolerance for OCs, I find the authors inject way too much of themselves or their friends in their OCs and it usually doesn't compliment the story. Hailey's trip to Harry's was fantastically well written and whether or not she's the walking embodiment of yourself or not, you did a great job with it. | |||
| CareCrystal | 2008.12.09 - 03:55PM | 7: Knockturn Alley | Signed |
| Reviewer: Rose of the West Signed [Report This] Date: 23/11/08 - 01:00 am Title: Knockturn Alley Interesting chapter. It's kind of fun to see Snape sort of bait Malfoy and let him walk into a trap, although if he's not careful, he will fall into the trap himself. (Just as an aside, the tea was chucked into Boston Harbor, which is quite some distance from the Hudson River, but that doesn't really affect the story.) Author's Response: I was wondering if anyone would catch Victoria's error (I did put it in there on purpose), it is called the Boston Tea Party for a reason, but I figured a Cockney witch wouldn't be well versed in the history of American Muggles. I'm glad you liked the chapter! | |||
| toasty | 2008.10.15 - 01:16AM | 6: Privet Drive | Signed |
| I've really enjoyed reading this so far. It's very believable, the way your original stuff fits seamlessly with the canon stuff. Author's Response: Thanks! It was very important for me to have my original story mesh well with canon. I'm glad to know you think it does. | |||
| Rose of the West | 2008.09.27 - 08:23PM | 6: Privet Drive | Signed |
| Hm, I wonder if she learned anything truly useful in that interview. Snape's reaction to what Harry saw was perfect. Meanwhile, I wonder who is in the picture album with almost certainly Lily...? Author's Response: An excellent question Rose. | |||
| johnbly341 | 2008.08.18 - 07:27PM | 5: The Heart Has Its Reasons | Signed |
| I'm so glad you have another chapter up. I really like the way you write Snape and I am enjoying your OCs. Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoy writing Snape. I'm happy you like it. I should have another chapter up soon. | |||
| NoxSomnium | 2008.08.17 - 11:15PM | 5: The Heart Has Its Reasons | Signed |
| How on earth did Severus get all the way down to his office that fast?
And yes, excellent chapter, but the above question was my most persistent thought on the subject :) Author's Response: Secret passageways of course, they are very convenient. :) | |||
| Rose of the West | 2008.08.16 - 12:21PM | 5: The Heart Has Its Reasons | Signed |
| I like your characters. I will enjoy seeing where this goes. Author's Response: "Story is what happens to someone you've been led to care about." So I'm glad you like the characters. You enjoy seeing where this goes, and I enjoy taking you there! | |||
| johnbly341 | 2008.07.20 - 11:38PM | 4: The Opening Act | Signed |
| I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait to see how you're going to weave it all together. Please give us a new chapter soon!!!! Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Trust me, I'm as excited as you are at the prospect of "weaving it all together." Because of course, I know everything that happens. ;) A new chapter will be here soon, don't fret! | |||
| tigerlily2 | 2008.06.07 - 03:46AM | 4: The Opening Act | Signed |
| Nice! Good for her! Author's Response: I'll be sure to pass along the compliment. ;) | |||
| greenwood | 2008.06.03 - 10:30PM | 4: The Opening Act | Signed |
| Wonderful chapter! I really like Hailey. She seems a strong character and it will be interesting to see how she battles Lucius since he will play dirty to the end no doubt. I will also love to see how Severus is worked into this since, I guess, he will be appointed Headmaster once Albus is "offed" . Since Hailey's father is a Governer for the school it will be interesting if he will be forced to agree with the position... I can't wait to see this story unfold. Author's Response: Thank you! Lucius will indeed play dirty, no doubt about that. You do have some interesting theories, I'll try to update quickly so you can see how they match up! | |||
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