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Reviews for The Dark Guardian and the Silver Boy

steelyblue 2008.03.15 - 11:18AM 8: Part One Chapter Eight Signed
This is a great story. All the characters are so rounded its like this is the way they were supposed to be. I love it. Severus' reluctant acceptance and Sirius' confusion when he finds he isn't as irrestitable as he assumes. Draco is just a star, one minute confident and brash. the next showing through that he's just a little boy. Beautifully done. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how this unfolds.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you like Draco. It was hard to keep a balance between him being the boy I needed him to be in the story without making him some kind of unlikely little sweetheart. Lots to go. Many thanks again.

i3luebyrd 2008.03.11 - 12:30AM 7: Part One Chapter Seven Signed
The tenderness between Snape and Draco is so wonderfully believable. I always wondered what their relationship was like in the books: one minute it seems they're getting along, then in Half-Blood prince they have that fight in Snape's office. And would Draco had been a more well-rounded person if Lucius had not raised him? Also, the tension between Snape and Sirius is paying off nicely into more than just angst. Great work.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I always thought that more could have been made of the underlying Snape/Draco relationship. Thanks so much again for reviewing. Scaranda

arcticvixen 2008.03.10 - 10:18PM 7: Part One Chapter Seven Signed
This just keeps getting better. Its so AU and yet the characters still retain the hints of canon to make them unmistakable. i love the way you portay the speech patterns and the the thought patterns of each of them so differtly that you hardly need to mention who they are. Looking forward to the next part. Vixen

Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Next part just about to be posted. Thanks again.

i3luebyrd 2008.03.02 - 01:57AM 5: Part One Chapter Five Signed
Love that part where Sirius skins the fruit at Lucius's table. Sirius's stunt with Lucius's Mercedes mirrored Lucius with his horse in an interesting way... expressing his own style. Nice.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. As for Lucius/Sirius, I suppose it's a bit of the 'every action has an equal and opposite reaction', if that makes sense, (or anything he can do, I can do better, or worse, as the case may be). Thanks again. Scaranda.

leading light 2008.03.01 - 02:47PM 4: Part One Chapter Four Signed
This is a great story. I'm loving it so far. Everything you write is so different and yet theres a comfortable familairity to your characters. Well done so far. Post more soon please

Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I'm so glad you're enjoying it; I know I enjoyed writing it. I'm posting the next chapter right now. Thanks again, Scaranda.

i3luebyrd 2008.02.29 - 10:00PM 4: Part One Chapter Four Signed
Loved that image of Lucius riding in on his horse in a frock coat and white silk. There's a nice friction going on between Snape and Sirius that is very enjoyable from the reader's perspective.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I always find Severus, Lucius and Sirius so write-able about-able, as though they had an awful lot more to say than they ever got the chance to put across. Glad you're enjoying it, and many thanks again, Scaranda.

Stella Stargazer 2008.02.27 - 09:23AM 4: Part One Chapter Four Signed
This version of Draco is quite fun to read. You seem to have a great for the way precocious ten-year-olds speak (being the parent of a precocious ten-year-old myself). I really do enjoy the way you've taken characters we know (in a flat, superficial way) and filled them out to your own specifications.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that. I used to be a precocious ten-year-old myself, but that was in the middle of the last century, or something like that, and we weren't permitted to speak out the way children do now. It gave us lots of time for thoughts of what we'd like to say though!! Thanks again, regards, Scaranda.

Titaniafey 2008.02.24 - 09:47AM 3: Part One Chapter Three Signed
OOOPs, that should have said I love YOUR style.

Author's Response: Guessed that!!!

Titaniafey 2008.02.24 - 09:45AM 3: Part One Chapter Three Signed
Theres going to be trouble between Lucius and Black, I can smell it. This is really good, I was so pleased to see another Scaranda story posted. I love our style and the atmosphere you seem to create. Please, please, please post more soon.

Author's Response: Aye, tears before bedtime, as they say in these parts. Thanks for that. Lots more coming soon. Thanks again.

i3luebyrd 2008.02.24 - 05:43AM 3: Part One Chapter Three Signed
Really hot chemistry betwen Snape and Sirius! I'm fond of how you chose to portray Draco: Snape's wit with Sirius's playful nature (and Gryffindor courage!). Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks again for that. Yes, Sirius, the quintessential Gryffindor schoolboy, still managing to blot his copy book with his Hogwarts days long behind him: a kind of playful psychopath. Thanks so much for reviewing.

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