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Reviews for Left Holding the Baby

Lill Snape	2008.04.29 - 01:56AM	17: Chapter Seventeen	Signed
Holy sh_t, what a great story. It really bothered me that you had a character death, hate those things. Understand why though. You nailed emotional response from this reader at that point. Reading along, minding my own business and shot between the eyes - lol. There was so much going on through out the read and you just kept slipping my guesses right out the back door. I never did figured out where you were going until you delivered at the end. Very, very good. Thank you for sharing. Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I have to admit that this story kept me guessing up until the end too and I had to keep going back and changing things.

johnbly341	2008.02.15 - 11:58PM	17: Chapter Seventeen	Signed
Great story...really well written. Your dialogue was very true to character and your plotting was interesting. You kept me guessing right up to the end. Nice job! Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I kept myself guessing for long enough while I was writing it! Thanks for reviewing.

arcticvixen	2008.02.15 - 03:29PM	17: Chapter Seventeen	Signed
Ohhhh, you killed him. I got a shock,I didn't notice the warning. Great ending though and a great twist. everyone really got their just desserts in one way or another. I've really enjoyed this story and Im looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Author's Response: Yes, I did. (Glad you didn't say who, by the way). Sorry about that, I didn't want to really, but he had things to say that he wouldn't have said while he was alive. Thanks so much for reviewing.