Reviews for Prisoners
||2010.11.29 - 07:48AM
|I really enjoyed reading it - your prose style is very good and fit well with the story line. I didn't like:
"And I did care, not in the way in he would think, not some righteous crusade of right against wrong, which I would let him believe. I cared ... I cared because I'd been in love with Sirius Black since I was sixteen years old." While it's good that you explain Severus'... callous nature, I think, it sounds weird for him to have loved Sirius since he was sixteen, when Sirius and James bullied him the most. |
||2008.04.29 - 02:33AM
|That was intensely heartfelt and piquant. Thanks for sharing.|
Author's Response: Thanks for that. I was never awfully sure if it came across that both needed a different thing and unknown to each other, got it.
||2008.01.16 - 02:02PM
|Phew, that was poignant.|
Author's Response: Thanks for that. I'm glad you enjoyed it.