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abbythebollix 2010.11.29 - 07:48AM 1: One Signed
I really enjoyed reading it - your prose style is very good and fit well with the story line. I didn't like: "And I did care, not in the way in he would think, not some righteous crusade of right against wrong, which I would let him believe. I cared ... I cared because I'd been in love with Sirius Black since I was sixteen years old." While it's good that you explain Severus'... callous nature, I think, it sounds weird for him to have loved Sirius since he was sixteen, when Sirius and James bullied him the most.

Lill Snape 2008.04.29 - 02:33AM 1: One Signed
That was intensely heartfelt and piquant. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. I was never awfully sure if it came across that both needed a different thing and unknown to each other, got it.

leading light 2008.01.16 - 02:02PM 1: One Signed
Phew, that was poignant.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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