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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

atheneblue 2009.03.15 - 11:07PM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
I guess this is the dissenting view, but I could have done without this chapter. I see the need for some of its content, but it wasn't one of your stronger ones. Sorry! There were some very funny lines, however. :)

hedge2staxy 2008.01.13 - 01:19AM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
I laughed so hard! Thank you for that.

ard 2007.12.31 - 09:50AM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
It took me to long to read this story simply for the fact i had to keep wiping the tears out of my eyes. Great chapter, All I could hear in my head was Ron screaming "my eyes, my eyes" Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter

Trickie Woo 2007.12.31 - 02:01AM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
Wonderful chapter, you had me laughing out loud until my sides ached. Once he acquiesced to Jane about punishment, even he must have realized that he's a goner. I wish you had continued through the Drivel spell, I'd love to read the mechanics of that spell and also what drivel he has in mind for each of them. The drivel for Hermione to speak must be unbelieveably stupid, that's the only way he could punish her effectively. BTW, I really glad that you have Fred surviving the Battle of Hogwarts, but since Lupin and Tonks survived in this story I should have expected that Fred would too. Update soon, I check for it everyday at least once and I was pleased tonight to find a new chapter.

trixee 2007.12.30 - 10:34PM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
I was so happy to see this story updated!! Please keep it up this chapter was hilarious!

linda0506 2007.12.30 - 04:35PM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
Love how the story is developing!

Deeble 2007.12.30 - 03:40PM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
That was both hilarious and touching.

testingt 2007.12.30 - 02:06PM 35: Pumpkin Juice Signed
Oh, could I ever see Ron doing this! You certainly got in some great lines. I haven't completed my research? I'm planning to kill myself, so I won't. And the image of James reciting the American Constitution.... Very nice last sentence, too. Thank you for a fine morning's entertainment.

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