Reviews for Wolf's Moon
NoxSomnium |
2007.12.31 - 01:00PM |
2: A House-Elf Named Winky |
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So, wouldn't Ruta's school years overlap with Remus' and therefore Severus' school time as well? If she spent time with her brother she would have at least been able to recognize Severus at the time, and I know he looks a lot different, but never mind. One doesn't jump to the conclusion that one has run into someone who's been dead for a long time. It's not an assumption one would make. Nevermind, I answered my own question. Are you proud of me? Other thing, how did he get Winky? Wouldn't someone at Hogwarts have noticed?
Author's Response: Her school time did overlap with that of Remus (and Snape) indeed, but I found a twist that makes it possible (at least IMO) that she kept away far enough to be unable to recognize him. You see, I have a beta who just asks those questions before she allows me to post anything - which should keep me from being too silly. *grins*
Cúthalion |
testingt |
2007.12.29 - 09:16AM |
2: A House-Elf Named Winky |
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I like how you are developing your characters; their voices seem very real. You've clearly got a lot of background here that you need to fill us in on!
Author's Response: Very true! My beta is of the persnickety kind, nagging and asking for every detail... which necessarily leads to lots of background. And I'll try to explain each and everything, promised. *grins*
Cúthalion |
greenwood |
2007.12.28 - 12:40AM |
2: A House-Elf Named Winky |
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So he decided to go "all the way" and show he is a wizard too? Very interesting. I guess he plans to stay dispite the likelyhood he will be found out? Great chapter. I am on to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I highly doubt that he "decided" so! That was more or less an accident... if Winky hadn't fulfilled his order with so much enthusiasm, Ruta wouldn't have found out that he is more than some shy, withdrawn, elder Muggle. Thank you!
Cúthalion |
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