Reviews for Severance Pay
lucymac |
2013.09.21 - 05:09PM |
1: Severance Pay |
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This makes me laugh uproariously every time I read it. Great job capturing the ridiculous red tape.
Author's Response: Thanks! It all started because I was thinking of his names, and words starting with sev.... |
Scaranda |
2007.12.16 - 12:56PM |
1: Severance Pay |
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Dear Mr or Miss Pullman, you do not say which,
As of today's date I do not seem to have received your transfer. I can only assume that, like the rest of what calls itself the Ministry of Magic, your department is totally inept, probably as a result of being staffed entirely by Gryffindors.
I look forward, more in blind faith than expectation, to its receipt.
Yours sincerely
Severus Snape
Author's Response: It's so hard to find competent help in a world filled with Gryffindors, Hufflepuffs, and the like! I've been enjoying yours, by the way--well, enjoyment isn't always the term. |
Gina R Snape |
2007.12.15 - 06:33PM |
1: Severance Pay |
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Heeeeeeeee. That would be so great, if that happened.
Author's Response: Snerf. One didn't have the impression that Wizard bureaucracy was better-run than ours. |
CarmenAlegria |
2007.12.14 - 01:20PM |
1: Severance Pay |
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Quite amusing. The messed up thing is, that sounds like something that would actually get sent out by the good folks at the Ministry. :D
Author's Response: What I'd like to know is, did his Gringotts account get credited? |
Deeble |
2007.12.14 - 05:34AM |
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I love that it's "not technically a violation" of his contract. (I suppose contracts won't normally include a clause about not killing your employer.)
Author's Response: An oversight I'm sure they've corrected. Er, I hope they've corrected. |
Overhill |
2007.12.13 - 11:42PM |
1: Severance Pay |
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This letter fits the style of the canon letters (esp. the ones in OotP - with the British stiff upper lip politeness), and how an owl can not only know where to deliever a letter, but to do so without being traced. This is a fun read. Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks- I rewrote my first draft with Mafalda Hopkirk's letter in front of me for verisimilitude. Glad you enjoyed it. |
kittylefish |
2007.12.12 - 03:12PM |
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clever and funny. made me laugh.
Author's Response: Thanks! |
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