Reviews for 1981
Rose of the West |
2008.07.25 - 12:36PM |
2: ...and Unwanted Enemies |
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Great development. It would be nice to see it continue.
I cannot figure out who the third person who knows about Lily, and Snape's true feelings, is.
Author's Response: Hi, I am sorry but though I have not abandoned my story ("1981"), I did decide against publishing it at Occlumency any longer - since the admins were not really helpful and rather discouraging. Sorry for that! I really didn't want it to end like this - but my beta did a great DOUBLE!!! (both betaing and reediting) job and I refuse to go against her (professional editor's in the past, btw) advises. The story is published, until current latest chapter 13 beneath the same name at www. fanfiction . net. If you read there, leave me a review by the latest chapter - just that I know if you still like it and if you see something that may be improved. (-: Iva |
funny music |
2008.06.03 - 04:45PM |
2: ...and Unwanted Enemies |
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Nice style, and a very good start but I have a feeling that this story is abandoned. Too bad. :(
Author's Response: Hi, I am sorry but though I have not abandoned my story ("1981"), I did decide against publishing it at Occlumency any longer - since the admins were not really helpful and rather discouraging. Sorry for that! I really didn't want it to end like this - but my beta did a great DOUBLE!!! (both betaing and reediting) job and I refuse to go against her (professional editor's in the past, btw) advises. The story is published, until current latest chapter 13 beneath the same name at www. fanfiction . net. If you read there, leave me a review by the latest chapter -just thatI know if you still like it and if you see something that may be improved. (-: Iva |
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