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Reviews for Catch a Falling Star

kickthemoon 2008.05.29 - 06:47PM 1: Chapter One Signed
Interesting story. Very emotional and difficult to untangle (but in a satisfying way!). All that helplessness that everyone had in response to Snapes' withdrawal. Dumbledore caught in a quandry and not sure of the best course of action was also a good detail - though the thought 'what's one more dabble in the Dark Arts' is a little scary, it doesn't seem to bode too well for the future. The ending was a little abrupt - I hadn't realised that it had finshed until I saw there were no more chapters and I checked that it was only a five-chapter fic. Overall, a good fic. Chapter One was especially powerful (I remember reading it a while back and thinking it was a one-shot and getting all sad thinking they had both died, I'm sorry I didn't leave a review that time.)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, regards Scaranda

Lill Snape 2008.04.29 - 12:59PM 5: Chapter Five Signed
Oh boy, I so much agreed with the chap 4 reviewer "Testingt". You had me boiling at that point. I do not know why but chap 5 lost its punch somehow. Your chapter made sense but it did not carry the emotionalism of the first 4 chapters. I do not know how to explain that for you. Somehow it was short of something, not that there was really anything wrong with the chapter. It was IMO missing something. Sorry, but thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks for that. All feedback is welcome, especially from those who take the time to write it. Thanks again.

steelyblue 2007.12.16 - 11:01AM 5: Chapter Five Signed
That was a beautifully told piece of work I really enjoyed that.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for that.

testingt 2007.12.15 - 10:44PM 4: Chapter Four Signed
Sorry, I should have reviewed before but I was too upset. Damn good, and I hope you'll get them out of this coil. Anyone who makes me log off the internet to avoid the story, then log back on to find out, had damn well better write fast. Thanks!

Author's Response: Many thanks for that, and for taking the trouble to log back on again!!

Titaniafey 2007.12.06 - 02:20PM 1: Chapter One Signed
Interesting but spooky, lol. like the different POVs

Author's Response: Many thanks, Titaniafey. I hope you enjoy the rest.

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