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Reviews for Love, Lily

Ausre 2011.04.12 - 08:35PM 1: Oneshot Signed
Lovely story, actually the part I wish we had in the books. Love how you make it into the cannon.

Author's Response: He deserved a thank you, didn't he? I wondered if there could have been something other than just the photo that made him cry so much - I reckoned if he had to be crying pretty hard for tears to drip off his nose! So glad it fitted into the canon.

isilinde 2010.06.07 - 04:15PM 1: Oneshot Signed
What a moving story - you actually made me cry. I think you captured both of them beautifully!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I cried at the scene in DH that this is based on, so if you cried too I guess I got something right!

Apatte5564 2009.08.03 - 09:02PM 1: Oneshot Signed
Nicely Done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Steph501 2009.05.15 - 11:16AM 1: Oneshot Signed
Wow...I'm not used to a bitchy Lily...was different but good :)

Author's Response: Bitchy? Were you reading the same story as I wrote?

Lady Whitehart 2008.12.10 - 03:02PM 1: Oneshot Signed
Very well done! It's refreshing to read a fic that doesn't turn Lily into uber-b*tch. And no, there is now way he could have been sarcastic at the time. ~LW

Author's Response: Thank you! She was so sweet to him at school and I reckoned time heals all wounds.

morgaine_dulac 2008.03.01 - 06:01AM 1: Oneshot Signed
Sob... beautiful and so, so sad. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you. I thought is was so sad that he could still cry over her photo that I wanted him to be forgiven.

Sylvia Linslade 2008.01.17 - 02:12AM 1: Oneshot Signed
I enjoyed this very much. I agree it seems a little OOC at first but that Severus would not be bitter and snappish with Lily, especially not at this point. Nice "missing scene" leading up to the fragment we're given in DH.

Author's Response: Thank you. I really believe that had Lily and Severus stayed friends, or got together, he would have been a totally different, much happier and therefore much nicer, person. And he felt so guilty anbout his conduct towards her I thought he couldn't possibly be bitter towards her. And after all it seems OOC for him to cry, yet he did in DH! Thank you.

snapefan51 2007.12.29 - 08:00PM 1: Oneshot Signed
I do think that there should have been a Severus/Lily scene after he died. Every other dead character was up and about. Thank you for writing this one.

Author's Response: Thank you. I just thought Lily would want to thank him, and to mend their frindship. After all he did I think he deserved that.

Author's Response: Thank you. I just thought Lily would want to thank him, and to mend their frindship. After all he did I think he deserved that.

DarkShine07 2007.12.21 - 03:00PM 1: Oneshot Signed
That is exactly how that scene should have been like in the book. :) Very nice, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you. That's very nice to know for my first attempt at fanfic!

LogicalQuirk 2007.12.11 - 12:17PM 1: Oneshot Signed
How sad - but how bittersweet that Lily returns to forgive him and acknowledge what he's done for her son.

Author's Response: I found the little paragraph it is based on so sad and wondered if there was anything more that had made him cry other than seeing the photo. I think Lily would be the sort of person to say thank you and to forgive him.

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