Reviews for Heat
||2007.09.04 - 04:02PM
|whoo-whoo! I like your Severus! And the beginning was quite funny, w/ Poppy wondering what was wrong w/ him. For some reason the bit about not practicing divination but using a barometer cracked me up!!|
Author's Response: Glad you like my Severus! *grin* This is, obviously, a different "world" than the Act of Love universe, and a slightly different Severus here. I thought the barometer was amusing, myself. ;D
||2007.08.31 - 02:41PM
|is it hot in here or what??, wow I just have to say wow, I've never read anything so beautiful and erotic in my life, now I'm all horny and this time I can't blame hormons or pregnancy lol. Seriously, perfect, amazing, wonderful and so erotic and sensual.
My favorite line was
"Severus had taken only a sip of his lemonade and sat stiffly, holding the glass in front of him as though it might explode at any minute." that's so like him, you wrote him perfectly and Poppy too, I never I would like this couple but wow!!! Thanks for writing it!!.
Author's Response: Thanks, Sam! Very glad you enjoyed it. They are a rather unusual pairing, but it made it fun, if somewhat challenging, to write! Thank you very much for reviewing!
||2007.08.28 - 02:33PM
|Wow!!! Talk about a heatwave indeed! Who knew that Poppy Pomfrey and Severus Snape could create such an erotic and invigorating lemon? It's not a pairing I would have considered before now but I must say, you've done an excellent job with them. And the fact that they're both still in character just goes to show why you're the ICON!!!
A wonderful zesty lemon. Wouldn't mind seeing even more lemons from you...wink wink!!!
Author's Response: Well, I know who you are, GLM, so I know you know where to find more lemons from me -- haha! -- but I presume you mean you'd like even more than that? Such demands! *wink* Thanks very much for the review, and I'm very glad that you found it erotic and invigorating! And I will try to come up with a few more lemons . . .
||2007.08.28 - 12:51PM
|I LOVED the story - for obvious reasons. :-) You did a wonderful job with the characters. Their awkwardness came through brilliantly. The idea of Severus sipping lemonade all buttoned up in Poppy's office still has me delighted. It was steamy and erotic and perfect! Thanks!!!!|
Author's Response: You are welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is kind of an unusual pairing! Hee! Thanks very much for reviewing!