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Overhill 2007.09.21 - 09:13AM 1: The Request Signed
Canon worthy! I like how you tell how Severus picks and uses the defenses in his mind, and how Voldemort is in this story, especially in the Mudblood/Pureblood talk, and how you use the firelight to heighten it. And the use of the word "worthy", as it comes up again shortly before Voldy's death.

trekker2002 2007.09.10 - 09:47AM 1: The Request Signed
Very good. I like the way you worked in that Voldemort concealed his ancestry. Also that he cannot conceive that 'love' could motivate anyone.

LogicalQuirk 2007.09.07 - 06:54AM 1: The Request Anonymous
Poor Severus; he tried so hard but he was far too late. The backstory you managed to weave into a short piece was nicely done, and Voldemort here is what I imagine to be realistic - sometimes he's written far too dramatically!

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