Reviews for Potomac
||2007.08.29 - 03:49PM
||17: Chapter Seventeen
|I'm still not sure I'm following all this. (All the conversation evokes knowledge and memories and history we aren't entirely privy to.) But you are superb at making the atmosphere seem real and vivid, and I'm really enjoying the story if only for that. I can smell the hay and see the dim light through the dirty window. Thanks.|
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I hope that I've been able to flesh out the details more in subsequent chapters. Of course, if there are any stories I've alluded to that you want to read more details, just let me know by review, or feel free to drop me an email at kodiakmac(at)gmail(dot)com.