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| Mimmom | 2008.08.23 - 01:41AM | 2: Chapter 02 | Signed |
| Very well done. The development of the relationship happens at an excellent pace. It's not too fast. Sometimes I see relationships just suddenly happen out of nowhere. This isn't like that at all. I like it that Percy really is a good and kind person but almost as misunderstood as Snape. Author's Response: Thank you. As I wrote it, I realised pacing would be one if the key issues with this fic. | |||
| ZahariaCelestina | 2007.08.31 - 07:40PM | 2: Chapter 02 | Anonymous |
| Lovely, lovely, lovely! A much improved pace for character development, which is as delicately and sensitively done as ever, like in every work I read written by you. The tone is still deep, but not as painfully intense to read as before. Well done once again! You're improving greatly and it shows! :) Author's Response: Thank you. ^^ | |||
| Stella | 2007.08.27 - 09:05AM | 2: Chapter 02 | Anonymous |
| I'm not usually a fan or even reader of slash, but I really enjoyed this story. I'm quite taken with the calm, analytical voice you have used to tell your story. It was also a nice diversion to read a Severus story which has him in a relationship with a less often appearing character like Percy. You've explained Percy's character well, keeping him within the bounds of canon, but yet explaining his actions within this story. Well done! Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. | |||
| Prefiera de Gryfalco | 2007.08.26 - 09:16PM | 2: Chapter 02 | Signed |
| Oooh, I must have missed the other chapters before. I do like this one. The emotion is so...raw. Very tangible. You can certainly feel Percy's anguish and frustration. Author's Response: There's only one other chapter. Thank you ^^ | |||
| Prefiera de Gryfalco | 2007.08.23 - 08:13PM | 1: Chapter 01 | Signed |
| I remember reading this quite a while back some where...I liked it then and I still like it now. Well done! Author's Response: Thanks :) I just decided to post it here, since Snaoe IS the protagonist, together with Percy. | |||
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