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Reviews for What Percy Saw

Mimmom 2008.08.23 - 01:41AM 2: Chapter 02 Signed
Very well done. The development of the relationship happens at an excellent pace. It's not too fast. Sometimes I see relationships just suddenly happen out of nowhere. This isn't like that at all. I like it that Percy really is a good and kind person but almost as misunderstood as Snape.

Author's Response: Thank you. As I wrote it, I realised pacing would be one if the key issues with this fic.

ZahariaCelestina 2007.08.31 - 07:40PM 2: Chapter 02 Anonymous
Lovely, lovely, lovely! A much improved pace for character development, which is as delicately and sensitively done as ever, like in every work I read written by you. The tone is still deep, but not as painfully intense to read as before. Well done once again! You're improving greatly and it shows! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. ^^

Stella 2007.08.27 - 09:05AM 2: Chapter 02 Anonymous
I'm not usually a fan or even reader of slash, but I really enjoyed this story. I'm quite taken with the calm, analytical voice you have used to tell your story. It was also a nice diversion to read a Severus story which has him in a relationship with a less often appearing character like Percy. You've explained Percy's character well, keeping him within the bounds of canon, but yet explaining his actions within this story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

Prefiera de Gryfalco 2007.08.26 - 09:16PM 2: Chapter 02 Signed
Oooh, I must have missed the other chapters before. I do like this one. The emotion is so...raw. Very tangible. You can certainly feel Percy's anguish and frustration.

Author's Response: There's only one other chapter. Thank you ^^

Prefiera de Gryfalco 2007.08.23 - 08:13PM 1: Chapter 01 Signed
I remember reading this quite a while back some where...I liked it then and I still like it now. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I just decided to post it here, since Snaoe IS the protagonist, together with Percy.

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