||2007.08.26 - 12:03AM
|This was a very wierd tale, and yet it works for some reason. Perhaps it is this story's charming dreamlike, fairytale quality. There is some wonderful writing here, but far and away the most haunting lines in the entire story were in Lily's last letter:
You are like a wild thing that has come out of the forest. Beautiful, strange and dangerous. I would face more pain falling in love with you than by denying you. You know it; we would only hurt each other and be worse off for it. You are not one to be tamed.
Ouch. Sad but true.|
||2007.08.25 - 09:22AM
|I really enjoyed this, beautifully written, full of raw emotions! Good job!|