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Reviews for Yes, but...

Tricorvus 2010.12.07 - 09:41PM 11: Eleven Signed
This makes me truly laugh aloud! Good stuff.

tigerlily2 2008.02.23 - 05:07AM 11: Eleven Signed
Oh no, Rita Skeeter! Good job!

Ehmaz 2007.09.13 - 03:43PM 11: Eleven Signed
Had me laughing out loud, great story so far! Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. There is a (long awaited) update up.

chrys 2007.06.28 - 03:18AM 11: Eleven Anonymous
gyaah!!! rita! rita! evil evil rita! =)

Author's Response: *giggle* Well, I've finally posted the next bit - more from Evil Rita.

Owlbait 2007.06.26 - 09:21PM 11: Eleven Signed
yay!!! so glad to get more of this story. looking forward to the interview, need more Tonks/Sev.

Author's Response: Well, no "interview" at least that we get to see from Snape or Tonks' perspective... but hopefully this works almost as well.

journeymom 2007.06.26 - 03:27AM 11: Eleven Signed
G** D******, this is why I am not a submissive woman. You can't go back and edit for spelling after you've already hit the submit button.

Author's Response: LMAO! Well, I'll pretend I never got the first one. I would've deleted it for you, but it seems I don't have the power, either.

journeymom 2007.06.26 - 03:24AM 11: Eleven Signed
[Falls off chair] You updated! I like the new tone. Your style is as sharp and evocative as ever. I can clearly see what the characters are doing. There is still a frisson of tension building between Tonks and Snape; it's delicious. Healing charms to your family, and (((hugs))) to you, from a complete stranger.

Author's Response: *gives a hand up* Careful there! I am glad that you continue to like the story, and even consider parts of it to be delicious! (It still surprises me that apparently I have a new tone, although enough people have said that now that I'm beginning to believe it.) Thanks for your good thoughts for my family.

journeymom 2007.06.26 - 03:22AM 11: Eleven Signed
[Falls off chair] You updated! I like the new tone. Your style is as sharp and evokative as ever. I can clearly see what the charaters are doing. There is still a frission of tension building between Tonks and Snape; it's delicious. Healing charms to your family, and (((hugs))) to you, from a complete stranger.

Author's Response: I thank you so much for your kind thoughts. Everyone's doing much better now... well except a brief issue with me and a broken tooth... but otherwise, all good.

Also, (please make sure you're seated in a non-precarious position) I've updated again.


Trickie Woo 2007.06.26 - 01:40AM 11: Eleven Signed
I've probably seen every movie Cary Grant ever made. His movies never seem dated, even the one with Mae West. I have to retract that first statement. I just checked IMDb and I've only seen every movie he made since 1937. He made 73 movies and I've seen more than 60 of them, I missed some of the movies he made in the early '30s. Be sure to see Topper and Arsenic and Old Lace, they will both have you rotfwl. I never saw a leading lady who didn't have a chemistry with him. What woman wouldn't want to be with Cary Grant anyway?

Author's Response: Okay, I just rented Arsenic and Old Lace from my library - I'd been meaning to see it anyway. And my, that's a lot of Cary Grant movies you've seen! I am duly impressed. I've been playing around with another screwball comedy idea inspired by old movies, but as interesting as the idea is, I really don't think I want to write it! How sad is that? Might post it as a challenge somewhere.

warty 2007.06.25 - 04:20PM 11: Eleven Anonymous
Great. Your style has changed ever so slightly, less attributes, it's good, it works well. A nice fast-moving chapter which kept to the point and had some beautiful one liners. Keep it up, sweets. Norma xxx

Author's Response: Glad you like! My earliest drafts are generally dialogue-only; I go in and add tags later. I think it just means that I went through and revised this one less! Norma?

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