Reviews for The Overlooked
| firewall |
2007.06.02 - 09:50PM |
18: Eighteen |
Anonymous |
| It just keeps building and building, doesn't it? I can't blame her for feeling rather helpless and hopeless. I'll be interested in seeing where you go next in this story. |
| Miss Granger |
2007.06.02 - 08:44PM |
18: Eighteen |
Anonymous |
| Oh, that's horrible about her aunt! I hope Voldemort's people don't know how to track Celeste down. I love this story's twists and turns! |
| Deeble |
2007.05.30 - 07:59PM |
18: Eighteen |
Signed |
| I've had a different reaction to the journal entries -- I like them. But I do agree that this one is the most striking. |
| amr |
2007.05.30 - 05:07PM |
18: Eighteen |
Signed |
| Oh, dear! Her poor aunt! I did wonder if the uncle might have Death Eater connections, but I didn't expect anything so horrible to happen so quickly. Your Celeste is really charming--I find her reactions absolutely believable, particularly the need to look at the sea after finding her aunt. I do think she might have safely got her stuff, though, since she left her room without being attacked. And if Severus got her wand, why didn't he get her other things? And I do wonder what on earth he took it for. If she needed an emergency wand, surely her own would do better than one she'd never seen before. But I'm sure you'll explain. Thanks for updating; I hope the next comes soon! |
| vailaaa |
2007.05.30 - 03:03PM |
18: Eighteen |
Signed |
| I have always hated these Journal chapters but I liked this one - I don't know why. I liked it. I like your Severus. |
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