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MithLuin 2007.05.21 - 08:26PM 12: Chapter Twelve: The Remus Lupin Study Group Signed
Nicely done! The Prank is just simmering, *waiting* to happen.... You paint a very believable portrait of these relationships. All this jumping back and forth in time is very effective for your story. And I enjoyed the use of the canon "Potioneers" which seems so random a word for it :)

Author's Response: Thanks for continuing to read and review. I'm glad the two time lines are working for you. When I first started the story, I worried that they would be confusing.




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