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Reviews for Unintended Consequences 2

Vorona 2007.04.29 - 08:54PM 10: Godric's Hollow Signed
Excellent... Though I want to know what happens next... Still, I think it's a good ending.

Author's Response: Thanks, Vorona! Glad you liked my ending.

memory 2007.04.24 - 07:33AM 10: Godric's Hollow Signed
Sorry, sorry, sorry! This time I was very late and I had to read two chapters together. Again sorry, but real life has its inconveniences... Now, the story it's beautiful, and I've liked it very much! The final chapters are offering us many interesting points of view. I always told you that I really like the way you present us new intriguing ideas about events still unclear. My, I hope you understand what I'm writing! Sometimes it's so frustrating being a foreign, I can't never express totally my thoughts. Anyway, I loved the story and loved the way you portrayed the characters. All my best congratulations for another outstanding success! From Italy with admiration. mariaemilia

Author's Response: Hi Mariaemilia, I'm just happy you found the time to read my story and let me know how you liked it! Thanks!

pudella 2007.04.15 - 08:36PM 10: Godric's Hollow Signed
Your story was such a pleasure to read, and this chapter was a great ending since finding out what happened at Godric's Hollow is so key to the story. I think losing Lily's was Snape's greatest loss and you wrote his thoughts and actions were right on the mark. I wasn't sure if putting Mundungus there was to indicate he was incompetent or a spy or both, but it's amazing they'd let him back into the Order. The thing about getting Hagrid, DD should have suggested a side-along apparition to Godric's Hollow, though the delay with getting Hagrid there would explain the timelapse that is currently unexplained in the story. I like how you used DD's instruments, which we always hear about in the books but never know their purpose.

Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you liked the whole story, and the end. My description of Dung's sleep was meant to leave open the possiblity of foul play as well. He had, after all, slept through a wizards' duel, and explosion, and having a cloak pulled off him on a cold night. Perhaps he'd just had a drink after the Order meeting with the wrong person. Or a couple too many. If it was not a betrayal - the Order is pretty small...

Author's Response: My DD did not suggest side-along Apparition for Hagrid because he wanted Snape to wait there longer, and have more time to think things over. This is not stated explicitly, but the benefit of Snape having time to think things over is one of DD's thoughts.

lunafish 2007.04.15 - 01:22AM 10: Godric's Hollow Signed
Now this is my favorite chapter! You have answered all those questions that I've been wanting JKR to answer in bk 7, and I can't imagine how she could answer them better. An excellent story! Now I must find more of your writing.... *wanders off to search*

Author's Response: *does happy dance* I dreaded writing this one because while I had worked out the logistics of what would happen, I really liked the previous one and did not want to end on a flat note. Also, with my guesses about Snape's motivations, this had to be an emotional scene and I worried about making over the top. It is nice to hear it worked for you!




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