Reviews for An Unexpected Light
trixee |
2007.12.25 - 08:30AM |
20: A Cut Too Deep |
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Awww...Man! this keeps getting better and better... Now I'm wondering if the Roxanne thing is a set up through Lucius to keep Sev in the Slytherin fold. KEEP WRITING PLEASE!Even though I'm a big Snape fangirl I still loved the way Sirius came to Joan's rescue.
Author's Response: Yes, he was wonderful like that. I'm torn between the whole Sirius and Joan thing because while he is at heart a nice person and he does really like her, they can't be together. Sigh |
darka |
2007.12.24 - 03:35AM |
20: A Cut Too Deep |
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Oh man, there is only one thing wrong with this story, and that is the fact that I have to wait for an update. ;) Each chapter you drive me to the end of my seat and leave me yelling MORE MORE MORE! Come on, the suspense is killing me.
Author's Response: LOL! I'm working as fast as I can. The good news is I'm now on holiday so I hope to get a lot more chapters out there in the next couple of weeks. |
vampkestrel |
2007.12.16 - 06:40PM |
19: James Bingly |
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oooh sneaky sev can't wait to see what he's up to now. Lovely chapters sorry i got a bit behind on reading them but i'm all caught up and cant' wait for more ^_^
Author's Response: I know he is terribly sneaky isn't he? |
BevDea |
2007.12.14 - 11:47PM |
19: James Bingly |
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oooooooo, I like a bad Severus. But why do I get the feeling that spiking her drink is going to lead to a massive row with lots of throwing of vases and such?
Author's Response: Probably because it is.
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trixee |
2007.12.12 - 09:55PM |
19: James Bingly |
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More! More!!! What did he slip into her drink?? Verateserum or some love potion???
One comment though : I had trouble understanding the transition between the Chapters... is Bingly the one who interrupted their kiss?
Author's Response: Sorry, sometimes I forget that the readers don't know the whole story like I do. Yes, Bingly was the one who interupted their kiss in chapter 17...I think it's 17, anyway, but he's not the same person who apears in chapter 16. I'll make sure to go back and amend that so it is clear. Thank you for pointing that out. |
BevDea |
2007.12.10 - 11:15AM |
18: What Lies in the Heart of Severus |
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I demand a director's cut! |
BevDea |
2007.12.09 - 04:09PM |
18: What Lies in the Heart of Severus |
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Gah! I love that Roxanne keeps "oiling" into the room and all over Severus; very descriptive. Is that you being extra creatively clever, or is that some aussie term? Either way, it makes me laugh.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so proud of myself. I came up with that all on my own! I'm a big girl now. I thought it rather fit her. Actually, I like Roxanne, she's fun to write, I wish she had a bigger part in this story...well she does have a bigger part but thanks to certain 'rules' ahem, I can't go into that. Damn rules.
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JamesandLily4ever |
2007.12.09 - 01:46PM |
18: What Lies in the Heart of Severus |
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OMG! AWW! I knew it!
That was sweet! Please add another chapter!
~Meli♥
P/s: 10/10! :D Please make them have a nice life together! ((Wait... add another chapter to see if they do something -- yeah, that's sort of better...))
You're doing a great job in writing this. (I myself can't really write Severus up this nicely... so yeah, compliments to the writer!)
Author's Response: LOL!!!!!! (rolling on the floor in a fit of laughter)Your reveiws have cracked me up! Thanks! When I checked my email this morning I thought I'd been hit by one of those Spam reviews SH has been warning about and then I just literally pissed myself laughing when I went to the reveiw page and read them all. I can now say, comfortably, that you are my biggest fan. I'm overwhelmed by your response to the story, it makes me very happy and inspired. Plus your insight on some paticular plot events was...perceptive, more so than other reviews I've read. I apoligize for the cliffhangers but I'm a rather big fan of them and they're going to continue. Otherwise, why would you want to read the next chapter? I can however put your mind at ease, Joan is very good for Severus and because I know I've been sooooo cruel with the plot and lack of...um...lack of...lemons? Is that what they're called? I'll go ahead and tell you that yes, things do end well for them but there's a lot to happen yet. If you like I can add you to my mailing list, that way you know when updates are out.
Cheers Ash |
JamesandLily4ever |
2007.12.09 - 01:34PM |
17: The Haelen Stone |
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Who is it??
~Meli♥ |
JamesandLily4ever |
2007.12.09 - 01:23PM |
16: What Could Have Been |
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DUDE!!! What happened????
~Meli♥
P/s: Excuse me. *giggle* I just wanted to know who appeared in the room and what exactly is Joan?? 10/10 yet again for a nice (yet cliffhanged) chapter. :] |
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