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Reviews for The Old Walls Crumble.

Blaccadder 2007.07.20 - 03:09PM 10: Of Myths and Magic Signed
Very nice story. I was hooked from the beginning. It keeps well to the books. My only gripe is the references to technology such as cell phones and email that didn't have widespread use in 1999 nor the sort of functions that the author implies (text messages). It's easy to forget the major leaps that mobile phones and computers have made in less than a decade.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. As to the technology - I did my homework. By 1999, cell phones had started text messaging and was in use expecially in Britain and Europe. The computer and e-mail was also being used quite widely - I know I myself was using e-mail to communicate with customers at my office. Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed. There's a bit more to come.

MithLuin 2007.04.26 - 10:32PM 10: Of Myths and Magic Signed
Is Hermione's e-mail the spell that made her teeth grow? I couldn't remember.... I'm thinking Lucius is going to regret "signing" his artwork - it will be a dead giveaway that it was him if anyone checks. Oh, and thank you so much for not going into excruciating detail with the physical side of their relationship. It seems more real to just get glimpses.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes you're right, it was the spell that made her teeth grow. The physical relationship between Jenny and Severus is just a part of a bigger story. In real life, sex takes a back seat to living day to day. This story is about moving on and finding happiness inspite of what others see or do.

greenwood 2007.04.11 - 12:17AM 10: Of Myths and Magic Anonymous
I just love this story! It keeps Severus in cannon with the cannon characters yet allows us to see a different side of him with Jenny (I really really like her as the OFC for Severus - she seems very real). I can't wait until you add another chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! If you think about how people are, they all have different faces depending on who they are dealing with. I doubt anyone treats a loved one the way they do an irritating co-worker, for instance.

LunaSnape 2007.04.08 - 11:47PM 10: Of Myths and Magic Signed
Awwwaa! I wish some guy would do that for me... preferably a tall dark and hooked nosed man ;) *LunaSnape*

Author's Response: If wishes were dreams and dreams came true (sigh).




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