Reviews for Orion's Pointer
fadedmarquee |
2007.08.13 - 04:29AM |
27: Chapter Twenty-Seven - Sly |
Signed |
I could visualize that brawl, and the poor spider's mangled corpse. Chara is definitely one interesting OC.
Author's Response: Thanks! |
LogicalQuirk |
2007.07.31 - 08:55AM |
26: Chapter Twenty-Six – Malicious |
Anonymous |
I'm sure Crouch!Moody would have been especially vindictive towards Snape and his office, given his hatred for 'Death Eaters that walked free'! Snape's frustration and resentment are captured very well in his dialogue and mannerisms. I'm also pleased to find that this story doesn't contradict canon, set when it is in Harry's fourth year. Who knows, maybe it really happened ...
Author's Response: Thanks, LogicalQuirk. I am trying to keep the story as believeably canon as possible, although I admit that I have mixed book canon and film canon together. |
darkmark111 |
2007.07.30 - 05:17PM |
26: Chapter Twenty-Six – Malicious |
Signed |
the plot just keeps growing more fascinating! please update soon. :)
Author's Response: Hi, darkmark111. I do have another chapter, but I'll wait until the story drops off the homepage before I upload it - sorry!. Plus I'm struggling with a chapter right now, so it buys me some time. |
darkmark111 |
2007.07.28 - 01:01AM |
16: Chapter Sixteen - Slip and Fall |
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i haven't laughed that hard in quite a while.
Author's Response: High praise... many thanks, darkmark111! I enjoy writing comedy much more than serious stuff. |
fadedmarquee |
2007.07.27 - 10:55PM |
26: Chapter Twenty-Six – Malicious |
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This story is fantastic. It seems inadequate to try and describe every single aspect of it that makes it so. Your characterization is spot on and your OC quite interesting. I'm curious to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Hi, fadedmarquee. Thanks for such a positive review, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! |
darkmark111 |
2007.07.27 - 07:23PM |
3: Chapter Three – Detention: Day One |
Signed |
this is fantastic so far, i cant wait to read further. :) |
LogicalQuirk |
2007.07.18 - 12:38PM |
25: Chapter Twenty-Five: Vindictive |
Signed |
Your Minerva and Hagrid are just as entertainingly written as your Snape. Yet again I find myself waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks LogicalQuirk. I confess I was stuck for quite some time at this point in the story, but now I have a couple of other chapters in the bag and ready to go. |
LogicalQuirk |
2007.06.25 - 10:54AM |
24: Chapter Twenty-Four - Seevy |
Anonymous |
I love the descriptions of the other teachers at lunch ... "Maxime was displaying her total lack of grace in complaining about the fish course being too awkward – awkward?" was my favourite :) I hope Snape's getting closer to solving the mystery!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not sure where that line came from. I think my brain was a bit wine-addled at the time. Hey, it's cold here and I was having a beverage to keep warm.
Solving the mystery?...yes, but there's layers, my friend, layers. |
DeadEva |
2007.06.24 - 03:38PM |
24: Chapter Twenty-Four - Seevy |
Anonymous |
Ach!!I cant wait for more.I love how Snape is.I do wonder what hid di while drunk...
Author's Response: Heheheh...it's one of those dirty little secrets that may or may not come out! |
professor_snarky |
2007.06.24 - 08:06AM |
24: Chapter Twenty-Four - Seevy |
Anonymous |
Interesting |
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