Reviews for Orion's Pointer
| ghost owl |
2008.05.20 - 05:51PM |
22: Chapter Twenty-Two – Ghosting in the Peripheral |
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| Thanks! |
| ghost owl |
2008.05.20 - 05:46PM |
5: Chapter Five - A Pain In The Neck |
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| Mh, I can't remember exactly where I learnt it, and I could obviously be wrong! Probably on the Lexicon or in some interview...well, one way or the other, it's not important, your story is great! |
| ghost owl |
2008.05.17 - 08:37PM |
22: Chapter Twenty-Two – Ghosting in the Peripheral |
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QED?
Author's Response: QED stands for the latin phrase 'quod erat demonstrandum', meaning 'that which was to have been demonstrated'. It used to be used at the conclusion of a proof, especially a mathematical proof. In this case it is used to say "well, there you go, you've just proved what I said was correct." |
| ghost owl |
2008.05.17 - 07:44PM |
19: Chapter Nineteen - Pieces |
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| I really like this story. It's nothing of the sort of always read before. I like the mystery, I like your Snape and I like Chara, sort of. She's an interesting character, but sometimes she gets on my nerves! Well, it's obviously not your fault, it's just me and my allergy to people with unknown strong powers (thought I'm sure she won't ever turn into a Mary Sue) and especially to people threatening Severus ;)
Good and interesting chapter! |
| ghost owl |
2008.05.17 - 04:11PM |
8: Chapter Eight - Waxing |
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| Ah, so she's not a Muggle! That's interesting...I like the mistery you're unfolding =) |
| ghost owl |
2008.05.17 - 03:19PM |
5: Chapter Five - A Pain In The Neck |
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I was a little tired of Snape/Hermione etc fics, so I tried the Snape/OFC :)
This story seems interesting, and I like your Snape! So very himself!
I was just wondering: how come that a Muggle is able to do potions? You need to be magical to do it. Or are you twisting it for plot needs? :)
Author's Response: It is possible I have made a mistake, but my understanding was that Potions did not require the use of magic. If that ISN'T the case, then I have made a major error! |
| LogicalQuirk |
2008.03.27 - 04:12PM |
36: Chapter Thirty-Six – The Opportune Time |
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Still loving the complete absence of Mary-Sue-ness in Chara, and your other OC in this chapter is great too. Nasty, but great! The various effects that Chara has on Snape are interesting as well; I suspect that she has more control over him than he realises?
Author's Response: I can't imagine a Mary-Sue doing quite this much vomiting.
Control? The capacity is there, but Parr would prefer the term 'ínfluence' ;) |
| NoxSomnium |
2008.03.22 - 12:39PM |
36: Chapter Thirty-Six – The Opportune Time |
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| Do we get to find out what they learned? And Snape ever get a clue (will Parr ever get a clue) Will either of them, ever develop sensitivity to other's feelings? :) I suppose I'll find out. |
| NoxSomnium |
2008.03.22 - 12:27PM |
35: Chapter Thirty-Five – Occupational Hazard |
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I'm still frequently becoming confused by the other people. I'd gotten the whole D.E./Greyback thing, but I didn't really get the people in the werewolf den for quite sometime. There's nothing wrong with being mysterious, but don't do it too often or we get confused about who precisely is being mysterious and how many people are being mysterious. Just something to be careful of.
Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I will try to be very aware of it. |
| kcole |
2008.02.29 - 02:15PM |
35: Chapter Thirty-Five – Occupational Hazard |
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I started this story a while ago. About time I said that I like it now that I'm all caught up again. Love the friction between Snape and Parr. The insults are great. Very funny. Good mystery also.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, and I'm glad you're still reading! |
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