Reviews for Orion's Pointer
LunaSnape |
2009.07.14 - 10:28PM |
55: Chapter Fifty Five—Propitious |
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Another great chapter :) I really like the idea of the fluidity of the minds, a very creative idea! |
javoher |
2009.07.14 - 03:02AM |
55: Chapter Fifty Five—Propitious |
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Wow. It feels like we're getting somewhere now. I love what you do with Lupin, wouldn't mind seeing more of him. Please, he's not an idiot just because Snape thinks he is - he's a very,very clever man. And if things go pear-shaped I'd love to see how Snape thinks on his feet. Greyback and MacNair are so believable it's nightmarish. Love this story, thank you.
Author's Response: I am pleased that you are enjoying it.
I agree that Lupin is not an idiot, but he can be a touch impulsive at the expense of critical thought - though not as bad as some! I believe the two traits can exist in a person, and that they can be both a blessing and a curse. |
Rose of the West |
2009.07.14 - 01:02AM |
55: Chapter Fifty Five—Propitious |
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That's a busy night they have scheduled. I hope they have time for everything.
Author's Response: Well, you know what it's like when you have a busy day planned. Something often happens to muck it all up. |
LunaSnape |
2009.07.13 - 12:12AM |
54: Chapter Fifty-Four—Under Duress |
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I am rather liking your story :) It is very well written and I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for both reading and reviewing - it's very much appreciated. I've just uploaded another chapter so with luck it'll be ready in a day or so. |
star_girl |
2009.07.04 - 06:04PM |
54: Chapter Fifty-Four—Under Duress |
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Hurray! I always look out for this story and I'm so pleased you've updated. Once again, I bow down to you for yet another very skillfully written chapter. More, please!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm in the midst of writing the next chapter now, but it may not be ready for another week :( - real life and all that. We'll see how we go. |
Rose of the West |
2009.07.01 - 12:02AM |
54: Chapter Fifty-Four—Under Duress |
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This chapter was quite informative for me; I'm not sure Snape found it so, though. |
MissMetal47 |
2009.05.11 - 07:28PM |
22: Chapter Twenty-Two – Ghosting in the Peripheral |
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what is chara talking about when she said "That thing you did last night with your..."
what did snape do that night?
Author's Response: Some things must be kept secret for the sake of public decency. ;) |
star_girl |
2009.04.25 - 04:12PM |
53: Chapter Fifty-Three—The Necessity of Complicity |
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As dense as this story is, it always keeps me coming back for more. You are a terrific writer, the only disappointment I get from reading is coming to the end of a chapter.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much and I'm glad you are enjoying it. I've lost a lot of people along the way so I'm glad to know that you're still here! |
Rose of the West |
2009.04.23 - 12:37PM |
53: Chapter Fifty-Three—The Necessity of Complicity |
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Two steps forward, one step back.
I love the way she keeps him off guard and how difficult it is for him to cope with it. |
sac |
2009.04.21 - 01:22AM |
52: Chapter Fifty-Two—A Light In The Dark |
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Your story is the only reason I check Occlumency for updates. It's dense and wonderful...Okay, I didn't mean to compare it unfavorably to a stollen. That would be favorable, of course. mmmm Marzipan.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think many are put off by the convolutedness of it, so I'm glad that hasn't scared everyone off! I'm hoping to have another chapter posted soon - it's currently with my beta.
Mmmm, stollen! |
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