Reviews for Orion's Pointer
Anonymous |
2007.04.01 - 11:27AM |
1: Chapter One: Parr For The Course |
Anonymous |
02-12-2007 20:50 Rated 9
Oh, who is she?
Narine
Author's Response: What? And spoil the surprise? ;)
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Anonymous |
2007.04.01 - 11:27AM |
1: Chapter One: Parr For The Course |
Anonymous |
02-03-2007 20:21 Rated 10
I don't often read original characters and I think I may have been missing out on some really incredible writing if yours is anything to judge by.
I am assuming that some questions I have will be answered next chapter because I have a feeling Severus will be meeting with Albus. If not I'll ask later on.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think reading an OC story does require the faith that said character will be interesting. Sometimes that faith is rewarded, other times not. Hopefully for my story it's the former..I hope so anyway!
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Kara's Aunty |
2007.03.31 - 01:57PM |
17: Chapter Seventeen - Foetor Mortis |
Anonymous |
A much more sombre chapter. Well written, too.
Poor Snape's git a lot on his plate what his disturbing memories, his peer's mistrust, the potential revival of a much-detested but necessary role & now his trouncing by Parr.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Haha, was that deliberate when you typed 'git' instead of 'got'?
I've read a lot of fics that are extremely dark and sombre with regards to Snape's role, and whilst I can appreciate them and enjoy them, I can't do angst myself. I've got to lever some humour in there. |
Kara's Aunty |
2007.03.31 - 01:26PM |
16: Chapter Sixteen - Slip and Fall |
Anonymous |
This was a fantastic chapter, I laughed so much!
Parr & Snape's verbal parrying, that hilarious scuffle & the lovely Lupin trying to keep the peace. Superb.
Parr has a good rapport with Lupin and it's good to see him in a story where he's not agonising over his furry little problem or fighting his 'inadequecies'.
I'm dying to know what that boggart would have turned into!
Author's Response: I do enjoy Lupin as a character, but he's frequently made out to be a bit wet. I prefer to think of him as tiredly resigned. And besides, Chara wouldn't put up with any mauldin crap from him! |
Kara's Aunty |
2007.03.25 - 05:41PM |
15: Chapter Fifteen - Waning |
Anonymous |
This gets more & more intrguing.
Was Chara a Death Eater?
If she needs a bezoar for her condition, why doesn't Pomfrey procure one for her? Okay, that would probably minimise the fun of Snape's attempts at detection.
Chapter 14 was hilarious! Minerva casting aspertions on the Slytherins' dancing abilities & that fabulous 'shag duty' quip! You have a great sense of humour!
Please update as soon as you can.
Author's Response: When the questions start getting asked, that's when I know it's time to answer them...but not here, bwah-ha-haaa! |
Kara's Aunty |
2007.03.25 - 04:40PM |
12: Chapter Twelve - Handover |
Anonymous |
I am enjoying this story very much.
Snape is such a deliciously nasty bastard & you write him well.
I am also enjoying the OFC, something that happens not too often as the tendeny to Mary-Sue them is more repugnant than a pool of vomit.
I am trying to guess what she is: Vamopire? Werewolf? Some, as yet,, unknown creation?
I actually howled with laughter at the image of Snape with his own rib stuck up his 'ice breaker' of a nose courtesy of Chara
Please do continue with this story. It's witty, has good dialogue, and is entertaining. Snape & Chara's interactions are great fun & I would really like some more snappy one-liners at his expense. Serve him right for picking on Neville!
Son't quite understand the rating button that's lurking under this dialogue box, but I'm assuming I've to mark you out of 10, so, so far 9/10.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Kara's Aunty. Yes, OFC Mary-Sues have me running screaming in the opposite direction, so I'm desperately trying to avoid having the same happen here. |
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