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Chapter Twelve - HandoverReviews For 13. Chapter Thirteen - A Slip Of The TongueReviews For 14. Chapter Fourteen - InformationReviews For 15. Chapter Fifteen - WaningReviews For 16. Chapter Sixteen - Slip and FallReviews For 17. Chapter Seventeen - Foetor MortisReviews For 19. Chapter Nineteen - PiecesReviews For 20. Chapter Twenty – Options Few & Far BetweenReviews For 21. Chapter Twenty-One - QuestionsReviews For 22. Chapter Twenty-Two – Ghosting in the PeripheralReviews For 23. Chapter Twenty-Three - TemperReviews For 43. Chapter Forty-Three—PatientReviews For 24. Chapter Twenty-Four - SeevyReviews For 25. Chapter Twenty-Five: VindictiveReviews For 26. Chapter Twenty-Six – MaliciousReviews For 27. Chapter Twenty-Seven - SlyReviews For 28. Chapter Twenty-Eight: ReceptiveReviews For 30. Chapter Thirty - BlameReviews For 31. Chapter Thirty-One - PainReviews For 32. Chapter Thirty-Two — Cut, Sever and BiteReviews For 33. Chapter Thirty-Three — AttachmentsReviews For 34. Chapter Thirty-Four — UncoveredReviews For 45. Chapter Forty-Five—Boundaries BlurReviews For 35. Chapter Thirty-Five – Occupational HazardReviews For 36. Chapter Thirty-Six – The Opportune TimeReviews For 44. Chapter Forty-Four—Undue HasteReviews For 39. Chapter Thirty-Nine—BrokenReviews For 40. Chapter Forty—The EdgeReviews For 41. Chapter Forty-One—IndentureReviews For 42. Chapter Forty-Two—ReplyReviews For 46. Chapter Forty-Six—BargainReviews For 47. Chapter Forty-Seven — Role ReversalReviews For 49. Chapter Forty-Nine—CanaryReviews For 50. Chapter Fifty — UnravelledReviews For 51. Chapter Fifty-One—ResetReviews For 52. Chapter Fifty-Two—A Light In The DarkReviews For 53. Chapter Fifty-Three—The Necessity of ComplicityReviews For 54. Chapter Fifty-Four—Under DuressReviews For 55. Chapter Fifty Five—PropitiousReviews For 56. Chapter Fifty-Six—TrackReviews For 57. Chapter Fifty-Seven—SlipknotReviews For 58. Chapter Fifty-Eight—Diversion fire wall 2007.04.01 - 11:38AM 13: Chapter Thirteen - A Slip Of The Tongue Anonymous 03-13-2007 02:11 Thank you. You've got me caught. I have to find out the mystery around her. Grrrr. Author's Response: Bwah-ha-ha-haaaaaah! LogicalQuirk 2007.04.01 - 11:38AM 8: Chapter Eight - Waxing Anonymous 03-07-2007 19:01 Rated 9 I'm really getting into this story, and your OC is well written as well with a noticable lack of Mary-Sueness (yay!). Although I have to confess to not knowing what Chara's fingers-crossed gesture was about in the previous chapter - erm, should I have? Looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: No, the gesture is deliberately foreign at this time. Thanks for the review, and there are five other chapters wiating for admin judgement! Anonymous 2007.04.01 - 11:38AM 8: Chapter Eight - Waxing Anonymous 03-04-2007 17:54 Rated 9 Looking forward to the next chapter! The story is well-written and so are Snape's lines, very in-character! :D I find myself wondering what exactly Chara is... Is she a vampire? :O What's the injury on her neck? Why did she grow so suddenly and is she taking Snape's form? A shapeshifter? She finds things, Orion points the way... is she to find Voldie? So many questions! Very intriguing storyline, I'm sure that you'll not reveal all yet but I'm eagerly awaiting new clues :D Keep up the good work! :) Sachiko Author's Response: Thanks, Sachiko. Hmm, I see I'm going to have to be careful what I let slip with you reading! snapette82 2007.04.01 - 11:37AM 8: Chapter Eight - Waxing Anonymous 03-01-2007 08:39 Rated 10 A flurry of updates. I'm getting more intrigued every minute, and really am enjoying this. Happy writing! Author's Response: Thanks! I think the flurry may stop now as there seems to be a big hold up in the Corrections Queue, so I can't upload any more 'til they're shifted :( I'm still writing, though! Isobel L 2007.04.01 - 11:37AM 6: Chapter Six - Reassessment Anonymous 02-25-2007 05:36 Rated 10 Oh but I love this story! Chara Parr is a fascinating, mysterious original character and I can't wait to find out more about her. Snape is written so well too, constantly sniping and baiting but not achieving any results to his satisfaction. Looking forward to the next chapter! Author's Response: Thanks! I confess that the next chapter is one of my favourites. Anonymous 2007.04.01 - 11:36AM 5: Chapter Five - A Pain In The Neck Anonymous 02-20-2007 23:37 Rated 10 "The fingers of death.." HA HA Love it! Pomfrey is wonderful here and the interaction between her and Snape is priceless! Gads you can write! Snape is such a wonderful bastard here (can he be more unsympathetic toward an injured student - or humanbeing for that matter!) How wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter. greenwood Author's Response: Gosh, thanks greenwood, you've made my day (and it's only 11am!). I personally have experienced fingers of death from a masseuse I used to go to regularly. I swear she could break concrete with them. snapette82 2007.04.01 - 11:36AM 5: Chapter Five - A Pain In The Neck Anonymous 02-20-2007 09:48 Rated 10 I am so intrigued by this story and looking forward to updates. Author's Response: Intrigue is good. Many thanks! I have three other chapters sitting on their lonesome waiting for approval. december 2007.04.01 - 11:35AM 5: Chapter Five - A Pain In The Neck Anonymous 02-13-2007 16:54 Rated 9 I 'm enjoying your story very much. You've been able to keep up the mystery but still reveal enough to make us want to read on. And I like Ms. Parr. It's refreshing to meet an OFC who doesn't immediately fall rapturously in love with Snape or vice versa. Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I'm afraid this isn't a 'lemon in the first chapter' story...not that there's anything wrong with that - hey I enjoy them, but Ms Parr...she's not that kind of gal. Anonymous 2007.04.01 - 11:35AM 5: Chapter Five - A Pain In The Neck Anonymous 02-12-2007 21:56 Rated 9 Very good story and some very nice twists in the plot! Narine Author's Response: Thank you. Here's hoping I don't strangle myself with the twists. professor_snarky 2007.04.01 - 11:35AM 5: Chapter Five - A Pain In The Neck Anonymous 02-11-2007 18:48 Rated 10 Interesting story — I look forward to reading more. Author's Response: Thanks! There are plenty more chapters to come. [Previous] 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 [Next]

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