Reviews for Orion's Pointer
macropis |
2007.04.12 - 10:25PM |
18: Chapter Eighteen - Innuendo |
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Glad to see this still updating. Sorry I haven't reviewed. The other site had Safari issues and sometimes my reviews disappeared.
Author's Response: Thanks, macropis. I don't have much experience with Safari; I'm a Firefox girl! |
LunaSnape |
2007.04.10 - 08:26PM |
18: Chapter Eighteen - Innuendo |
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Oh yay an update! This story just keeps getting better!
*LunaSnape*
Author's Response: Why thanks! 'fraid the chapters will be slower in arriving now, but thankfully my beta is on my case to make sure I don't get slack! |
Trickie Woo |
2007.04.08 - 08:32PM |
1: Chapter One: Parr For The Course |
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Snape has always reminded me of my music theory instructor, and in this paragraph you've captured him to a T.
"The other members of the class were starting to fidget, so it was time to get the lesson underway. He went through each stage of yesterday’s lesson in painful detail, slipping in snide comments wherever possible. Perhaps guilt would force them to try harder, or even simply try. Situations like this were truly insufferable…idiot students stumbling about through the subject as if their brains had been removed. "
It seems as if you were sitting right there in his class.
This promisses to be an interesting story.
Author's Response: Thanks, Tricky Woo. I think we've all had at least one teacher like this at some point in our schooling. For me, it was a chemistry teacher!
Author's Response: Argh! Sorry I spelled your name wrong! |
fire wall |
2007.04.03 - 08:00PM |
11: Chapter Eleven - Bark or Bite? |
Anonymous |
03-13-2007 01:37 Whoa! Talk about underestimating a person!!! |
nachliele |
2007.04.01 - 11:41AM |
17: Chapter Seventeen - Foetor Mortis |
Anonymous |
03-28-2007 21:08 Rated 10
Wow... this story is complicating! I am absolutely enjoying it- I haven't left the computer from the first chapter until I got here. I cannot see where it's going at all and I'm intrigued! The writing is fantastic and the dialogues between Severus and Chara are riveting. I especially loved the analogy between the locked doors and leglimency two or three chapters back. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks, nachliele, and welcome to the story. It's always a buzz to get a new reader. And thanks for the 10!
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professor_snarky |
2007.04.01 - 11:41AM |
17: Chapter Seventeen - Foetor Mortis |
Anonymous |
03-28-2007 19:32 Rated 10
Poor Severus! He really doesn't know when to quit, though.
Author's Response: Well, sometimes you have to push it to see where the boundaries are. Thanks for the 10 rating!
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snapette82 |
2007.04.01 - 11:40AM |
16: Chapter Sixteen - Slip and Fall |
Anonymous |
03-26-2007 09:51 Rated 10
Running out of things to say, but keep going! Kxx
Author's Response: I am, but sometimes it's like being chased by a runaway lawnmower! Thanks for the 10 ;)
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snapette82 |
2007.04.01 - 11:39AM |
14: Chapter Fourteen - Information |
Anonymous |
03-19-2007 14:29 Rated 10
Ten again! And the mystery deepens further. Want to give your most avid reader a hint? :-)
Author's Response: Don't worry, it won't be long before I let the dog out of the bag. Did I say dog? I meant 'cat', of course!
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professor_snarky |
2007.04.01 - 11:39AM |
13: Chapter Thirteen - A Slip Of The Tongue |
Anonymous |
03-18-2007 23:24 Rated 10
I think I'm as curious as Snape is about Parr :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the 10. I hope your curiosity ends up adequately rewarded.
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snapette82 |
2007.04.01 - 11:39AM |
13: Chapter Thirteen - A Slip Of The Tongue |
Anonymous |
03-13-2007 16:02 Rated 10
Wow, this gets better with each chapter. When I click on it, I get three new chapters, which is an absolute treat. I am completely caught up in the mystery and who Chara is.
Author's Response: I had a backlog of chapters, so I'd upload them in batches, which is why they come through to the archive in chunks. However, it's nearing the stage where it's going to catch up with me!
Thanks for the reveiw and the 10!
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