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Reviews for The Overlooked

amr 2007.04.01 - 11:09AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-06-2007 22:36 Rated 10 I'd forgotten the title of this one and thus have had the pleasure of two chapters at once. I'm glad you're continuing it--an excellent premise, and I like your Celeste. And your Snape. It's hard to write from his viewpoint without softening him, and you're doing a great job. Since this is clearly the summer of 1996, when he took her to Ollivanders, I was sure she was going to warn him about a Death Eater attack, thus precipitating his flight. Oh well, at least she's got her wand. The parallels with Harry are quite striking; I'm curious as to how that is going to work out. Dumbledore seems to think it's a connection with Voldemort, but since she feels pain where Harry's scar is, it sounds like it's with him to me. Fascinating story. Thanks for posting it for us. I look forward to your next!

Zagzagael 2007.04.01 - 11:08AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-06-2007 19:00 Rated 10 This is just utterly fantastic - you're a gifted writer and a brilliant characterist. The fic pulled me in from the very beginning and I read it straight through. Your OC is so wonderfully done that there was no hesitation on the part of this reader to accept her completely as presented. Well done! I prefer this Intellectual!Snape and you're doing a great job of keeping that particular Snape in character - I really enjoy his interior monologues!!! And you've deftly set the scene with a bit of erotic tension. Looking very forward to your next chapter!

Orlando Switch 2007.04.01 - 11:08AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-06-2007 13:18 Rated 10 Ahhhgrr you did it again! First a wonderful chapter, than an evil cliffie. Please update soon! Ps What I really like about your story is the believable storyline and your effort to make detailled characters of both Snape and Celeste.

snapette82 2007.04.01 - 11:07AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-06-2007 08:50 Rated 10 I adore your writing and am completely caught up in this story. Happy writing!

fire wall 2007.04.01 - 11:07AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-06-2007 02:47 Rated 10 Ack, you left me dangling! What an evil, evil cliffie! Snape is wonderful in this story as he's his usual acerbic self. I'm looking forward to reading your next update as usual.

Anonymous 2007.04.01 - 11:07AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-06-2007 00:47 Rated 10 Oh, now I'm all caught up, and you left me with an awful cliffie! I just love the interplay between these two -- I get the feeling that Snape might have finally met his match. Update soon! MsGranger

beaweasley2 2007.04.01 - 11:07AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-05-2007 21:28 Rated 10 I - um WOW! This story gets better and better. I'm positively hooked! I would recommend this story to anyone – even those who like strict canon character portrayal and those who like a softer Snape. The development is still as intriguing as ever and I can’t wait till you post again – but I guess I have too….

hedgehog 2007.04.01 - 11:06AM 7: Seven Anonymous
02-05-2007 21:00 Rated 10 Evil cliffie! Thanks for the update.




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