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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

greenwood 2007.04.01 - 01:11AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
14-11-2006 04:15 Rated 10

Wow! What a wonderful angsty meeting between Malfoy and Snape. You paint such a vivid picture of the two of them it is so easy to see the scene play out. Full of venom and spite ("Armadillo Bile" is an apt title for this chapter). I can't wait till you give us a new chapter!

swampthing 2007.04.01 - 01:10AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
06-11-2006 13:06 Rated 10

Smackdown! I do love it when anyone gets the better of Malfoy the elder. And the one about his wife was such a nicely delivered put-down.

CMWinters 2007.04.01 - 01:10AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
03-11-2006 18:10

What a truly Slytherin chapter!

Maggie 2007.04.01 - 01:10AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
03-11-2006 16:06 Rated 10

Very well written.....

abba 2007.04.01 - 01:09AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
03-11-2006 06:06 Rated 9

I have just discovered this story, and find it a refreshing portrayal of Snape. You've an obvious flair for prose and dialogue, and some of your descriptions have made me snort with laughter. You have Snape's characterization spot-on. The only quibble I have with the plot is that you've not yet convinced me that Jane is a worthy object of Severus' affection.

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