|03-11-2006 06:06 Rated 9
I have just discovered this story, and find it a refreshing portrayal of Snape. You've an obvious flair for prose and dialogue, and some of your descriptions have made me snort with laughter. You have Snape's characterization spot-on. The only quibble I have with the plot is that you've not yet convinced me that Jane is a worthy object of Severus' affection.