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Reviews for Unintended Consequences 2

Vorona 2007.04.29 - 07:41PM 4: A Tale of Remorse Signed
Ooh! This just keeps getting better. This is, by far, my favorite chapter so far. I love the tension here: we never know if Voldemort will accept it or curse him or something, and then there's the remarkable feeling of victory at the end. Wonderful!

Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! It was challenging to write - Voldemort has to buy the explanation, but not seem too gullible.

pudella 2007.04.01 - 10:21AM 4: A Tale of Remorse Anonymous
04-03-2007 02:26 Rated 10

This is the best telling I've read of how Snape was able to get the job at Hogwarts. Some other stories I've read I just didn't believe that Snape could pull it off, but in yours I completely believed how he was able to fool Voldemort. It was an intricate web of both logic and emotions. It also makes me think that Voldemort expects obedience from his followers but rewards those that can think outside the box.

Author's Response: Hi pudella,

Thanks for leaving your review. I'm glad you like my take on this subject.

I imagine Voldemort would mostly judge followers based on their usefulness to him rather than just on blind obedience. I'm thinking of the graveyard scene, in which he calls Lucius his 'slippery friend'. He realizes Lucius is 'slippery', but will put up with it to a point because Lucius is useful too.



memory 2007.04.01 - 10:21AM 4: A Tale of Remorse Anonymous
03-03-2007 08:05 Rated 10

Hi again! This was a very interesting chapter! I liked very much the conversation between Snape and Voldemort, with all its subtleties. Now I'm left wondering: was Voldemort's last action an act of thank or a disapproval? Waiting to know what happen next and possibly soon. As always, hope you understand my bad English. Saluti. Mariaemilia

Author's Response: Hi Mariaemilia,

I'm glad you enjoyed the scene. In the first chapter, I set up Voldemort's action at the end of this chapter as a mark of favor towards a Death Eater. But does he really mean it in this case? Well, I can't answer that, can I?






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