Home | Members | Help | Submission Rules | Log In | Recently Added | Categories | Titles | Completed Fics | Random Fic | Search | Top Fictions Reviews for The Old Walls Crumble. View All ReviewsReviews For 12. Delivering Yesterday's Memories TomorrowReviews For 11. The Gathering Clouds of WarReviews For 10. Of Myths and MagicReviews For 9. DiscoveryReviews For 1. PrologueReviews For 2. Bitter lessonsReviews For 3. Meetings and ConsequencesReviews For 4. Mourning ChoicesReviews For 5. Sorceror's ListReviews For 6. Painful LoyaltyReviews For 7. Christmas RevelationsReviews For 8. Choices of the HeartReviews For 13. Blood, Oaths and PromisesReviews For 14. The Eighth HorcruxReviews For 15. Just RewardsReviews For 16. Seven Weeks and a MilleniumReviews For 17. Tomorrow Without WallsReviews For 18. Love revealedReviews For 19. Epilogue sarabella76 2007.06.01 - 11:16AM 2: Bitter lessons Signed This is very well written and your characters are very in character. I like your portrayal of Snape, but I'm having a hard time picturing him with short hair. LOL. The interaction with Bella was perfect. I think you've got me hooked on this one. pudella 2007.04.01 - 11:19AM 2: Bitter lessons Anonymous 04-02-2007 03:42 Rated 10 I was not familiar with the terms , "larder", "betters", "priest hole", "switch" and "ticking" (the last two I never saw used this way), but I looked them up so I learned something new. The image I get in my head of Snape with short hair and a beard sounds like hans gruber from die hard. I can't imagine Snape telling anyone they should "marry and have lots of babies". I imagined Snape getting payment from Narcissa, not Bellatrix, but I he can't afford to be choosey. Author's Response: I try to use Britishisms where they would apply and I'm glad you were able to find them. Bella, as far as I'm concerned, has little in the way of morals left in her bones and let's face it, Severus is a MAN... Yeah! LunaSnape 2006.09.18 - 04:13PM 2: Bitter lessons Signed O lala! LOL! I like it! But can you bring Jenny back soon? I liked her. Update soon *LS* Author's Response: Don't worry, you'll see lots of Jenny - she's got a lot to say. Lydia 2006.09.18 - 11:40AM 2: Bitter lessons Signed Very well-written story ... I'm looking forward to more! greenwood 2006.09.17 - 11:59PM 2: Bitter lessons Anonymous Well written, well ended. Severus' softening toward Draco seems in such contrast to how he treaded Bella. The contrast was sharp and biting. Very dramatic and gave the chapter great depth. I look forward to more of this story. Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comments. I think you'll find my Severus a man of contrasts - the story is finished and off to the beta. Hopefully, I can post more frequently.

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