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Reviews for The Train

Raven Espusse 2007.05.01 - 12:08AM 1: one-shot Signed
I like this... The only problem I see is that Hermione thought that the Sorting was some sort of test, so it obviously wasn't in Hogwarts: A History.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I don't really see a problem. Ron thinks it's some kind of test. Hermione only hopes that she'll go to Gryffindor and then recites the spells she knows under her breath. She could have thought that the hat would test her. And Lily didn't have to know just exactly how the hat sorts either. (I had to go back and re-read. ;) )

Sylvana 2006.10.09 - 11:44AM 1: one-shot Signed
This is a test

EXECUTR 2006.10.08 - 04:56PM 1: one-shot Signed
Nice story. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

EXECUTR 2006.10.08 - 04:56PM 1: one-shot Signed
Nice story. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: With the archive moves, I must have overlooked your review. Sorry, and thank you very much!

maryh 2006.09.01 - 01:40PM 1: one-shot Signed
"I like my Lily cheeky but not unfeeling." Agreed. I think many fanfics portray Lily as much too "nice." After all, Slughorn said she would have fit right into Slytherin, which is not exactly the House of the Nice. Actually, Gryffindors don't tend to be all that nice, either, come to think of it ...

Author's Response: I agree, they have quite a few things in common, althouth they probably use different tactics. But they're blinded by their prejudice.

maryh 2006.09.01 - 01:09AM 1: one-shot Signed
Hmmm. I thought it Sectumsempra too, and was going to make the same comment about it being too advanced. Your option is more possible, and also explains why Lily *wasn't* as shocked.

Author's Response: Hm, maybe I should have made that clearer? It never occurred to me that it could be confused with Sectumsempra. I like my Lily cheeky, but not unfeeling.

rambkowalczyk 2006.08.30 - 04:09PM 1: one-shot Anonymous
good details on why James and Sev hated each other from the get go. However I don't think that Severus would have known/invented Sectumsempera as a first year. Maybe a curse that would cause boils or something. Also I would have expected Lily to be more shocked at what Severus did esp if he hurt someone. Still good story.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. Severus didn't use Sectumsempra on James, that would be too advanced for a first-year, I agree. He used the same spell the older Snape used on Harry in 'The flight of the prince'. A whip-like something striking out that's painful, but doesn't injure. He tells Lily that he read about that spell in one of his uncle's books. I'm having Severus invent Sectumsempra in his seventh year. You can read it in 'Decisions' here at Occlumency.

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