Reviews for Innocence Found
NJ Dryad |
2012.06.13 - 06:51PM |
7: Chapter Seven |
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Wow, you can write comedy as well as mystery and drama. I particularly liked the stupid way Camilla acted when she got drunk. And Severus is a perfect gentleman as usual, leaving the lady to take care of herself. |
JamesandLily4ever |
2006.08.14 - 04:43PM |
7: Chapter Seven |
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I'm sorry for Sev too! Soooo it was a potion?
~Meli
P/s: I hope he gets better...
Author's Response: Poor Severus. I really do love him--you wouldn't know it reading this. It might be a potion, it might not. You will find out, though. : ) |
EXECUTR |
2006.07.05 - 06:29PM |
7: Chapter Seven |
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Okay. Please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have written quite a bit, so you can expect regular updates. : )
Author's Response: Thank you! I have written quite a bit, so you can expect regular updates. : ) |
Elaine Lahey |
2006.07.05 - 12:15PM |
7: Chapter Seven |
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I am avidly following this story and really enjoying it, however I have one criticism. I don't think Snape would think very much of a woman who is foolish enough to get drunk and leave herself in the power of a stranger. I think a barmaid or bartender would have seen enough drunkeness to want to avoid it for themselves, but I could be wrong. I think I'd rather see Camilla pretend to drink shots and dump the liquor somehow. I look forward to reading the next installment.
Author's Response: Well, this wasn't Camilla's most brilliant move, of course. I can see what you're saying about Snape, but as someone who has worked in the service industry for 7 years, I can tell you that bartenders do drink. A lot. That's why they work at bars: fast cash so they can go blow it on partying. I'm really glad you're enjoying it and thanks for your comments. : D |
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