Reviews for The Long Night
lunafish |
2007.04.15 - 02:24AM |
4: The Death Eaters |
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So exciting! My heart's pounding like crazy.
Author's Response: Thanks! It's good to hear I was successfull in keepimng upt he suspense through tthe middle part of the story. |
Potioncat |
2006.08.16 - 07:37AM |
4: The Death Eaters |
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I'm enjoying this story very much. The flash of anger Draco shows towards Snape and Bella is very telling, I'm wondering if Snape will use it later.--no, don't tell me! I like the way you describe Snape hiding some thoughts and pulling up others in preparation for Voldemort's Legilimency.
Author's Response: I'm pleased that you are still liking the story now that I'm in uncharted territory, speculating about what might have happened next.
I had to think of something for the Legilimency-I can't believe Voldemort would fail to notice one of his Death Eaters clearing his mind of all thoughts and emotions, and I don't think he would stand for it if he did.
And yes, there will be more Draco. I'm not saying what will happen, though!
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memory |
2006.07.04 - 10:51AM |
4: The Death Eaters |
Anonymous |
I've been following this story from the first chapter but never left a review till now... The reason? Because I was really envious of your prose!!! I like your story very very much and I hope it is going to be as good and interesting till the end. Please do not disappoint me! I too have been intrigued by the idea of what happened after the end of book 6 and I've seen that some of our ideas coincide. I am also trying to write something, but it is a long and difficult process for me because I'm Italian... You don't know how you are lucky, you "native speakers". Anyway, great job! I've particularly enjoyed this chapter. Hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Well, I am glad you finally did decide to leave a review!! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story, I certainly think that the additional scenes I have planned should live up to the rest.
And good luck with your writing...I can't imagine trying to write a story in a foreign language. |
Floris |
2006.07.04 - 04:08AM |
4: The Death Eaters |
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Very, very good! I'm really enjoying this. "He will be sharing your accommodation, for the time being" That should be interesting!
Author's Response: Hi Floris, it is nice to see your comments after each chapter! Yes, there will be more of Bellatrix and the Malfoys to come... |
gabrielsangel |
2006.07.03 - 03:11PM |
4: The Death Eaters |
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Great chapter. But I am a little worried about Severus. He is still bound by the Unbreakable Vow to protect Draco. Will he be released from the Vow or will he have to continue suffering for Draco's mistakes? Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving your review! I am pleased that you liked my last chapter. About your question, I am going to have to pull a Rowling: "No comment".
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kodiak1 |
2006.07.03 - 02:53PM |
4: The Death Eaters |
Anonymous |
Wow! What reward will he recieve?
Author's Response: It's good to hear from you again! I'm afraid I won't answer your question, though... |
whitehound |
2006.07.03 - 02:39PM |
4: The Death Eaters |
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This all seems highly believable.
Author's Response: Thanks for leaving me a review. I've spent way too much time online debating the end of HBP after it came out last year. It is nice to put this to some use!
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