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Reviews for The Long Night

kodiak 2006.07.12 - 12:23PM 6: Bellatrix's Hideout Anonymous
another compelling chapter. Thank you so much for sharing this.

Author's Response: It's nice to see people coming back for more of the story. Thanks!

memory 2006.07.12 - 03:36AM 6: Bellatrix's Hideout Anonymous
Sorry for being late to review. The story keeps being very interesting. I like the idea of exploring what is going on between Draco and Snape. The quartet (Narcissa, Bella, Draco, Severus) has a lot of intriguing interactions. If I remember well, we have only just another chapter left? You sure you can't go on? I'm really enjoying your narration, I hope you'll find a way to keep it going. As always, congratulations from Italy (and hope I didn't make too many mistakes!)

Author's Response: That's right, I only have one more chapter left (it is in fact already in the queue, all done and waiting to be approved!) I like my current ending, so that's definitely the final chapter of this story. But comments and questions people have made in reviews have given me some ideas that might, someday, wind up in a sequel...we'll see. Thanks for your comments!

janis 2006.07.11 - 10:03PM 1: The Forest Anonymous
When I first read Xenasquill's story, I knew that I wanted to be her Beta. She is very talented and has a tremendous eye for detail. This first chapter made me want to read more, and frankly, I was sorry to see the story end. I've already read the entire story and I can promise everyone that they'll be satisfied with the ending, but still want her to continue writing as she has captured Severus perfectly.

Author's Response: You stopped by to leave me a review. And such a nice one! *blushes*

whitehound 2006.07.10 - 09:24PM 6: Bellatrix's Hideout Signed
This is very physically vivid - you can really feel how tired everybody is. And presumably it isn't over yet.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pleased my descriptions aer working for you. No, it is not quite done yet...it was a very long night, I guess!

potionmistress60 2006.07.10 - 07:39PM 6: Bellatrix's Hideout Signed
In a rare moment of relaxing after work, I decided to check out your story. Very interesting and quite a plausible telling of what "might" happen. After reading your first chapter, I decided to continue on until I reached your last installment. You have done a very nice job keeping everyone in character. I am really enjoying your fic and look forward to your next update.

Author's Response: I am glad you stopped by to try my story! Keeping everyone in character was what made me the most nervous. Dumbledore and Voldemort in particular, they are so important to the series, and so distinctive.

MithLuin 2006.07.10 - 07:08PM 6: Bellatrix's Hideout Anonymous
Very interesting! I hope you will continue this story after the Long Night is over? I wonder what LV is going to use Harry's hatred of Snape for...and how Draco will react to being Snape's pupil again.

Author's Response: Sigh...I would need to figure out what LV is up to for that! I am thinking about it, anyway. If I figure something interesting out, I will.

greenwood 2006.07.10 - 11:44AM 6: Bellatrix's Hideout Anonymous
Brilliant chapter! This story seems so in keeping with cannon. You have the characters down pat. I thought the way old Voldy handled the news of Albus's death was in keeping with is character very well. Some stories I have read have him killing Narcissa and while that could happen I don't really think he would dispose of someone that could still be usefull as a pawn in the bigger picture (Lucius has not been released yet so there needs to be "motivation" handy just in case). Voldies interest in the fact that Potter really hated Snape is sort of scary since we don't know how he will use this information to his advantage (I am sure it will not be to Severus's advantage). I really look forward to the next chapter. This is a very well written story with a wonderful amount of mystery and tension. Keep it coming!

Author's Response: My version of Voldemort's reaction to Dumbledore's death was actually one of the key ideas I had that caused me to want to write this story. I really like the contrast Rowling has made between those two characters and their priorities. Thanks for your comments!

memory 2006.07.09 - 04:32AM 5: Lord Voldemort Anonymous
My, my, my... you are surprising me again! Never thought that Voldemort could have enquired about Snape's part in Draco's plan! Very, very interesting. I keep enjoying your work very much and I'm anxiously waiting for more. Just a question (if you can answer it, of course): Will the story develop completely in one night or is it going to extend in the following days too? Thank you for sharing! My comments are going to follow your chapters as soon as they come out. From Italy with admiration, Mariaemilia.

Author's Response: Ciao Mariaemilia! I am glad that you like the new chapter. To answer your question, this story is only going to cover the events of the one night. I have two more chapters planned.

memory 2006.07.04 - 10:51AM 4: The Death Eaters Anonymous
I've been following this story from the first chapter but never left a review till now... The reason? Because I was really envious of your prose!!! I like your story very very much and I hope it is going to be as good and interesting till the end. Please do not disappoint me! I too have been intrigued by the idea of what happened after the end of book 6 and I've seen that some of our ideas coincide. I am also trying to write something, but it is a long and difficult process for me because I'm Italian... You don't know how you are lucky, you "native speakers". Anyway, great job! I've particularly enjoyed this chapter. Hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: Well, I am glad you finally did decide to leave a review!! I hope you will continue to enjoy the story, I certainly think that the additional scenes I have planned should live up to the rest. And good luck with your writing...I can't imagine trying to write a story in a foreign language.

Floris 2006.07.04 - 04:08AM 4: The Death Eaters Signed
Very, very good! I'm really enjoying this. "He will be sharing your accommodation, for the time being" That should be interesting!

Author's Response: Hi Floris, it is nice to see your comments after each chapter! Yes, there will be more of Bellatrix and the Malfoys to come...

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