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Reviews for Into the Fold

morgaine_dulac 2010.02.24 - 12:58PM 31: The Pensieve and the Phial Signed
Your updates are always worth the wait.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've finished the story, so with any luck you won't have to wait three months for another update.

testingt 2009.12.09 - 08:26PM 15: Feathers, Mushrooms and a Willow Signed
I love the way you have his jealousy and insecurity lead him astray,,, and he doesn't even understand that avoiding the term doesn't mean he's not expressing the same sentiments really. (Tears hair--oh, Severus.)

Author's Response: *(Tears hair--oh, Severus.)* How true. Thank you!

testingt 2009.12.09 - 08:11PM 29: The Patronus Signed
I never reviewed this chapter! You capture the sadness of the fact that his happiest memory is Lily--and that the happiest can also be the most painful. His calling Dumbledore on preferring James was good.... I want more, please.

Author's Response: Thanks! *I want more, please.* I'll complete it soon, edit it and begin posting again.

LadySeverus 2009.10.30 - 10:05PM 30: A Lesson with the Dark Lord Signed
Your LV really knows how to make the wounds fester for Severus. However, I would expect nothing less of him. Omniscient in so many ways but oblivious at the same time. As always, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!

morgaine_dulac 2009.10.29 - 03:59AM 30: A Lesson with the Dark Lord Signed
Your Voldemort gives me the creeps, being all so "understanding". *shudders* Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Rose of the West 2009.10.27 - 05:37PM 30: A Lesson with the Dark Lord Signed
All those things that Dumbledore had to work so hard to build up, and now the Tedious One wants to break them down. Quite a tug of war that has started.

Author's Response: *Quite a tug of war that has started.* True, and I wouldn't want to be the man in the middle. Thank you!

Librasmile 2009.10.07 - 10:06PM 29: The Patronus Signed
A new chapter. Yay! I think what I like most about your writing is its compactness and groundedness. You create transcendence without losing hold of concrete reality. THAT'S a gift. And the emotional kernel(sp?) of this chapter was in fact Severus realizing that Dumbledore wishes it was him instead of James in that bed. The cruelty of that is breathtaking but again utterly grounded in reality. I've read The Auror and the Apothecary -- wonderful work by the way -- and, along with this, you create quite a standard to match. Your work is quite an education for me :^)

Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm glad you liked A&A too. *The cruelty of that is breathtaking but again utterly grounded in reality.* I love writing about Severus and Dumbledore. They are both very flawed, yet both are struggling to do the right thing.

LadySeverus 2009.10.07 - 09:49PM 29: The Patronus Signed
I'm always so excited when you post another chapter! Despite the dark patches and the layers that have to be oh so slowly and painfully peeled away, we see glimmers of the light inside Snape. It is definitely there, always has been, but just so deeply hidden. The amazing patronus he produced shows how bright his light could be. Ah, if only he had made different choices... It's always back to the choices eh? Love this story. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! *Ah, if only he had made different choices...* True. And it seems to me that, unlike Riddle or Harry, he might have.

a1severuslives 2009.10.07 - 09:09PM 29: The Patronus Signed
Thank you for the update. Your writing is beautiful. Severus is so intense and passionate. In real life he would be so difficult for anyone at all to like. Your story blends so well with the adult canon Snape. He feels like he would shun women as weak and emotional, this feels so tangible it makes his pathetic obsession for Lily believable. You have really nailed AD! Wow!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you feel this way about the story.

morgaine_dulac 2009.10.07 - 12:44PM 29: The Patronus Signed
Another beautiful chapter. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked!

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