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Reviews for To Travel Through Time: Part Two: Untouchable

LunaSnape	2006.07.08 - 09:02PM	21: Quality Maraudering	Signed
Like I said at the end of your other story... It might take me awile but i really wanted to read this story and drumroll plz ANOTHER HIT! I love this one too. God I love the unexpected twists -I feel that i'm watching LOST, I love this young Snape that has captured my heart, I love the old more mature version- I can just hear the words you have written coming out of his mouth, I love Kes because to me, she's sooo funny and so much like Sev that I just care so deeply for her, I love the encorperationsp? of demons, I love the envolvment of gypsy folk lore and I definialy love this story! Like I said before I tend to gush over things I like LS P.S. I for one enjoy your angsty and interlude chappys. P.S.S. PLZ UPDATE Author's Response: stares Damn. Wow. Thanks. I'm all bowled over. I'm currently editing the third installment, which is why I haven't been seen lately. The next chapter should be up soon. blinks blushes Thanks so much! I hope I continue to let you enjoy this! -Mel

theatre_geek	2006.06.26 - 12:12AM	21: Quality Maraudering	Anonymous
hands author piles of food it was nice to come back to two new chapters. i had been on vacation for 3 weeks (a very much needed one) and though the chapters seemed to lack depth it is understandable to have them build up to the great chapters i know you have in store. Author's Response: :) I hope you really enjoyed your vacation. I actually don't like this installment as much as the first or the third -- however, once I get all this off my plate, I will probably come back and do some major editing. :p I hope I live up to your expectations! -Mel

Trickie Woo	2006.06.06 - 01:02AM	21: Quality Maraudering	Signed
Severus said the Marauders planted a lion in the common room. When she got there a lion was sitting in the middle of the common room, but it says she vanished a dragon in the same paragraph. Please sort that out for me. The Marauders really were a big pain in the ass, she was entirely too soft on them. She should have disciplined them the way Severus disciplined dunderheads and all other students who annoyed him when he became the potions master and head of Slytherin House. Author's Response: EEP! Thanks for pointing that out (oops). Typo, dunno why I wrote dragon. The whole point behind it was, in fact, to show what Severus learned NOT to do. :) I tried to do it the Severus-way, but it didn't fit the image I had molded in my mind, past Achlys and future Achlys. -Mel