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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

whitehound 2006.06.03 - 02:45PM 2: Elf-made Wine Signed
A very nice dry, dour-but-humorous take on Snape.

Carrot top 2006.06.02 - 12:48PM 1: Prologue Signed
intersestiing beginning, please update soon.

Silverthreads 2006.06.01 - 09:18PM 1: Prologue Signed
I like Snape's last line (not to mention that he got the last word). :D

RockMobster 2006.06.01 - 11:51AM 1: Prologue Signed
I love the way you wrote this chapter and I'm looking foward to the next one... the conversation between Snape and Harry is very well written and I love that last line.... Keep on Keeping on!

Anouska Draconius 2006.05.31 - 09:43AM 1: Prologue Signed
Very interesting start. I look forward to reading more and seeing how this story develops. I loved your closing line.

Hypnobarb 2006.05.30 - 08:50PM 1: Prologue Signed
Ooh. Interesting beginning. I wonder where you will go with this?

Lydia 2006.05.30 - 02:50PM 1: Prologue Signed
Very intriguing start! I particularly like the closing line: “Remember that this year your Potions book will not come equipped with my notes.” One point, though - the cigarettes. While I'm not adverse to the idea of Snape being a smoker (although I've never pictured him as such ... yet there must be some reason - perhaps lots of coffee to deal with early morning potions classes? :) - for his yellow teeth), as a smoker (yes, bad habit), I have to note that it is not really possible to light a cigarette and, with two inhalations, draw it down to the filter. I see that sometimes in fiction and it is very dramatic, but not really likely ... particularly the more one smokes. Still, well written first chapter. I look forward to this story being updated.

Trickie Woo 2006.05.29 - 12:03AM 1: Prologue Signed
I find your beginning intriguing, but I wish you'd get rid of the cigarettes. I've never come across smoking in Potter fan fic before. I don't believe Snape would have been able to get through the Cruciatus curses he's suffered as well as the many other things he's been through if he was a smoker. I see him and the Slytherins as feeling that they are above the lure of a cigarette. After all they can inflict their own evils on each other, the rest of the wizarding world, and the Muggles without the outside help of tobacco. Heck, they probably feel they are more insidiously evil than tobacco is anyway.

Aeron 2006.05.28 - 09:46PM 1: Prologue Signed
Ok, I'll bite. Nice start here and great closing statement. Although, I liked your, “That’s what he thinks.”, line too. Looking forward to the next update.

whitehound 2006.05.28 - 12:58PM 1: Prologue Signed
Promising start, nicely written.

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