Reviews for A More Merciful Man
greenwood |
2006.09.07 - 10:48PM |
11: Bitters |
Anonymous |
Great moments with Severus...I think your title of "bitters" was quite appropriate. Wonderful short chapter. Snape was very angsty here. Keep it coming. |
TRE |
2006.09.07 - 09:06PM |
11: Bitters |
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Madame Lestrange *obligatory giggle* I guess the Ministry is very good at giving slaps on the wrist.
Yes. I can see Snape enjoying the privileges of wealth and relaxation. |
Deeble |
2006.09.07 - 08:10PM |
11: Bitters |
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I laughed out loud at "He did however consider himself quite capable of enjoying a lavish lifestyle and a higher social position." Ah, don't we all. |
Hypnobarb |
2006.09.02 - 11:23PM |
10: More of the Macallan |
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This is an absolutely delightful story. Severus is terribly human, Albus has become Hogwart's newest Professorial ghost - a brilliant idea, and there's a funny Squib with the hots (mutual as it is) for Severus.
Clever, fun, and nicely written. You have a dab hand at dialogue. Thanks for all the work you've put into this story!
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Kodiak |
2006.08.29 - 02:34PM |
10: More of the Macallan |
Anonymous |
This is hilarious! The tension between Snape and Flintrammel is fabulous, an I'd love the antagonism with Lupin.
You might want to fix this one sentence though... "Doesn’t any of that doesn’t appeal to you?”
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TRE |
2006.08.26 - 09:58PM |
10: More of the Macallan |
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...when suddenly the werewolf’s nostrils flared, and he looked away, a slight blush creeping across his face. OMG! I knew this was going to happen! I adore it when authors use Lupin's sensitive nose against the characters!
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greenwood |
2006.08.26 - 08:23PM |
10: More of the Macallan |
Anonymous |
Great chapter with a really good mystery ending (I love those). Well, it would seem that Severus is a bit frustrated! Ha! Can't wait for the next chapter to find out if he gets into further trouble. |
Deeble |
2006.08.26 - 06:41PM |
10: More of the Macallan |
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The attempts at Death Eater arranged marriages have begun! I'm continuing to enjoy this story and your Snape. |
Kodiak |
2006.08.24 - 11:19AM |
9: Scottish Breakfast |
Anonymous |
You are so wicked! I love reading this. |
Deeble |
2006.08.17 - 08:07PM |
9: Scottish Breakfast |
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Yes, this is probably exactly how Snape would react. And probably exactly the amount of experience he's had. I liked how you turned fanon convention on its ear with Snape noticing her long, deft fingers instead of the other way 'round. |
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