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Fawkes_07 2007.04.01 - 01:13AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
22-11-2006 06:52 Rated 10

Aaaargh! Bad Snape! No biscuit! *ponders "Memento" and "Groundhog Day"* You know, young man, it may seem like the easy way out This Time, but keep it up and you're going to get in trouble...

*stomps off grumbling about greasy gits*


deeble 2007.04.01 - 01:12AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
22-11-2006 02:44 Rated 10

Oh that coward! It's just like Snape, mind you, that he refuses to try emotionally for fear of not succeeding. Assuming he won't succeed, in fact. (Nice chapter title too.)


Hotgoose 2007.04.01 - 01:12AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
21-11-2006 18:07 Rated 10

wow excellent chapter. i'm so happy they've finally kissed. please update soon!!!!


minutiae 2007.04.01 - 01:11AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
21-11-2006 16:42 Rated 10

I'm really taken in by your story thus far - I love the interactions between Snape and Lupin, and Snape's musings (droll and dour at the same time) remind me of the Britcom "Reginald Perrin" - they're laugh-out-loud funny, and in character! The bit about adding senna to the Wolfsbane and the possible result had me in a knot, as did the odd necrotic ailment of Ollivander's previous tenant . . . I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story. And thank you for the "meaty" chapters - very satisfying.


greenwood 2007.04.01 - 01:11AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
14-11-2006 04:15 Rated 10

Wow! What a wonderful angsty meeting between Malfoy and Snape. You paint such a vivid picture of the two of them it is so easy to see the scene play out. Full of venom and spite ("Armadillo Bile" is an apt title for this chapter). I can't wait till you give us a new chapter!


swampthing 2007.04.01 - 01:10AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
06-11-2006 13:06 Rated 10

Smackdown! I do love it when anyone gets the better of Malfoy the elder. And the one about his wife was such a nicely delivered put-down.


CMWinters 2007.04.01 - 01:10AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
03-11-2006 18:10

What a truly Slytherin chapter!


Maggie 2007.04.01 - 01:10AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
03-11-2006 16:06 Rated 10

Very well written.....


abba 2007.04.01 - 01:09AM 13: Armadillo Bile Anonymous
03-11-2006 06:06 Rated 9

I have just discovered this story, and find it a refreshing portrayal of Snape. You've an obvious flair for prose and dialogue, and some of your descriptions have made me snort with laughter. You have Snape's characterization spot-on. The only quibble I have with the plot is that you've not yet convinced me that Jane is a worthy object of Severus' affection.


Pudella 2007.04.01 - 01:09AM 12: Mandrake's Obsidian Anonymous
06-02-2007 01:18 Rated 10

I was wondering if we would find out more about Eva?


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