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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

adele rose 2007.04.01 - 01:19AM 16: First Flush Anonymous
07-12-2006 18:24 Rated 9

Oh, my, that was not the most explicit sex scene I've read, but it certainly was one of the hottest love scenes! It's funny how helping someone, as Snape does here, can break down all kinds of barriers. I do hope that Snape is decent to her, after. I wonder what he will do about Hagrid, not to mention Lupin . . . .

I'd also like to know a bit more about Jane's feelings and thoughts. And what will she think if she ever finds out that Snape had obliviated her before--I suppose the only way she could find out is if he told her. He seemed to feel rather guilty about it. I wonder how this will effect his feelings about the Obliviate.

I was interested in both her "admission" that Snape had been right about having a Squib at Hogwarts and in Snape's reaction, or non-reaction. It's funny that you named her "Jane," as it always seems like a common, plain name, evoking a dull "Plain Jane," but in reality, I have known very few Janes in my life, and the few I have known haven't been ordinary or dull.

Nice chapter!


deeble 2007.04.01 - 01:18AM 16: First Flush Anonymous
07-12-2006 19:59 Rated 10

Wow.

Erm ... that's all. You've rendered me speechless.


Hotgoose 2007.04.01 - 01:17AM 16: First Flush Anonymous
07-12-2006 18:04 Rated 9

Dying to see what happens next, please update soon!


Kodiak 2007.04.01 - 01:16AM 15: Cinnamon Tea Anonymous
05-12-2006 23:22 Rated 10

Oh, wow! Is Lupin off playing 'Cupid'?


Hotgoose 2007.04.01 - 01:16AM 15: Cinnamon Tea Anonymous
30-11-2006 19:13 Rated 10

loved the ending!


greenwood 2007.04.01 - 01:15AM 15: Cinnamon Tea Anonymous
29-11-2006 21:33 Rated 10

What a wonderful chapter! I loved Snapes conversation with Lupin and the note on which it ended! Now the mystery is just what does Lupin have in mind! I can't wait to find out. don't keep us in suspense too long.


Pudella 2007.04.01 - 01:15AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
05-02-2007 22:59 Rated 10

Oh I was not expecting the ending of this chapter!


CMWinters 2007.04.01 - 01:15AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
29-11-2006 21:20

Oi. What a prat he is! (But quite nice writing. . . )


Hypnobarb 2007.04.01 - 01:14AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
27-11-2006 17:01 Rated 10

Oh, did Severus ever miscall this one. I'm pretty sure that in life's little instruction book, it says quite clearly never to obliviate someone you have snogged into a state of - ahem. It's going to add so much confusion when one gets the urge to snog them senseless again.

Oh. He thinks he's done having the urge to snog Jane senseless. Silly goose.

Delightful story and marvelous characterizations!


serellie 2007.04.01 - 01:14AM 14: The Waters of Lethe Anonymous
23-11-2006 00:57

Nice... now Snape's going to have to seduce her all over again. He just can't help himself it seems. Greatly enjoying the story. Keep it up!


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