20-12-2006 08:36 I haven't been able to keep up with reading much fan fic lately, but boy, am I glad I checked tonight and found this. Once Severus knew he was a goner and there was nothing else to do but to take her the writing became some of the most intensely erotic I've ever read.
It was like listening to Wagner's music written for the scene in Tristan and Isolde where they get carried away by their lust for each other and then the music reaches it's summit just as they do.
You've proven that erotic writing does not have to be explicit, that it is far more powerfully erotic when the writer has given it such an excruciating buildup and set such a perfect mood that it spins itself out to the point of almost orgasmic pleasure. At least it did that for me, and I'm going to slip my husband a Viagra in his bedtime drink so I can get the full effect of it.
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