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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

Faraday 2007.04.01 - 01:23AM 18: Fresh Squeezed Anonymous
05-02-2007 13:00 Rated 9

Hooray! What fun! I thought the sex was great...and so did they it seems. MORE!


greenwood 2007.04.01 - 01:22AM 17: Second Flush Anonymous
17-01-2007 01:40 Rated 10

I just love Jane and her way of thinking! What a wonderful character you have invented for our dear Potions Master (and quite his match in a strange way). This was yet another great chapter. Keep it coming!


thorn 2007.04.01 - 01:22AM 17: Second Flush Anonymous
15-01-2007 19:27 Rated 10

That was the best after sex dialog I have ever read. Snape was so in character!


Trickie Woo 2007.04.01 - 01:21AM 17: Second Flush Anonymous
02-01-2007 08:36

This was almost more erotic than the last chapter. I love her seduction techniques, I'll have to try them myself as soon as my UTI is gone.

I went back and read the reviews I wrote at the beginning of the story and what I said about the cigarettes. I'm so glad you didn't have him pull out a cigarette and light it up at the start of this chapter, their conversation was better than any cigarette could have been..


Kodiak 2007.04.01 - 01:21AM 17: Second Flush Anonymous
26-12-2006 20:02 Rated 10

Wow!


deeble 2007.04.01 - 01:21AM 17: Second Flush Anonymous
26-12-2006 16:20 Rated 10

Oh, I like her. She's sensible and funny, and she knows just how to deal with Snape.


Trickie Woo 2007.04.01 - 01:20AM 16: First Flush Anonymous
20-12-2006 08:36

I haven't been able to keep up with reading much fan fic lately, but boy, am I glad I checked tonight and found this. Once Severus knew he was a goner and there was nothing else to do but to take her the writing became some of the most intensely erotic I've ever read.

It was like listening to Wagner's music written for the scene in Tristan and Isolde where they get carried away by their lust for each other and then the music reaches it's summit just as they do.

You've proven that erotic writing does not have to be explicit, that it is far more powerfully erotic when the writer has given it such an excruciating buildup and set such a perfect mood that it spins itself out to the point of almost orgasmic pleasure. At least it did that for me, and I'm going to slip my husband a Viagra in his bedtime drink so I can get the full effect of it.


Kodiak 2007.04.01 - 01:20AM 16: First Flush Anonymous
15-12-2006 19:49 Rated 10

I'm so glad that you added this. That was very well told and perfectly paced. Can't wait to see more... (yes, I am greedy).


greenwood 2007.04.01 - 01:19AM 16: First Flush Anonymous
08-12-2006 05:32 Rated 10

Oh my! That was a bit hot to say the least. What a discription of lust (it sounded almost painfull! Ha). It was like reading about a dam breaking. Great story so far. I thought the plant was such a great lure and bait to get Severus moving in the right direction. It will be very interesting to find out how he "feels the next morning" about his failure to adhear to his stance on this romance.


adele rose 2007.04.01 - 01:19AM 16: First Flush Anonymous
07-12-2006 18:24 Rated 9

Oh, my, that was not the most explicit sex scene I've read, but it certainly was one of the hottest love scenes! It's funny how helping someone, as Snape does here, can break down all kinds of barriers. I do hope that Snape is decent to her, after. I wonder what he will do about Hagrid, not to mention Lupin . . . .

I'd also like to know a bit more about Jane's feelings and thoughts. And what will she think if she ever finds out that Snape had obliviated her before--I suppose the only way she could find out is if he told her. He seemed to feel rather guilty about it. I wonder how this will effect his feelings about the Obliviate.

I was interested in both her "admission" that Snape had been right about having a Squib at Hogwarts and in Snape's reaction, or non-reaction. It's funny that you named her "Jane," as it always seems like a common, plain name, evoking a dull "Plain Jane," but in reality, I have known very few Janes in my life, and the few I have known haven't been ordinary or dull.

Nice chapter!


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