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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

Carrot top 2007.06.22 - 07:51PM 23: Bloody Mary Signed
Excellent! I especially liked the ending and I liked that Snape drinks very blood like Bloody Mary's.

snapescat 2007.06.22 - 06:19PM 23: Bloody Mary Signed
is that it? did he kill himself? did he disapparate somewhere? after a year of AP english one would think i'd be able to pick up on the subtelties to the end of this. is this the very end? will there be an epilogue?

cmwinters 2007.06.21 - 09:37PM 22: Gall Signed
Wow. . . that could be bad . . .

snapescat 2007.06.16 - 02:02AM 22: Gall Signed
what a twist! do post more and soon, please! i haven't read a good fic in a while and too many of my favourites have been abandoned. so i hope you post some more chappys!

snapescat 2007.06.16 - 01:34AM 20: Amortentia Signed
i am particularly fond of dumbledore's letter. and quite amused by snape!matchmaker. although i would assume him to be a little more acidic than described here, you kept it all very amusing and he remained fairly snapish throughout it. good job.

snapescat 2007.06.15 - 09:49PM 14: The Waters of Lethe Signed
ah! why?! why did he have to obliviate her? *dramatic sigh* this is very good and she doesn't seem very mary-sue-ish, as many snape love stories tend to include. i commend you. now i must continue to read....

Faraday 2007.06.14 - 04:52AM 22: Gall Signed
My first review of your story - I'm really enjoying it. The dialogue is wonderful and well-crafted. I look forward to more!

Trickie Woo 2007.06.12 - 02:15PM 22: Gall Signed
Thanks for the tip. I reread Chapter 7 and it made what happened in this chapter much easier to figure out. What a terrible match Licius selected for Snape, if he were forced to marry Princilla he would strangle her, if nt AK her soon after the honeymoon began. But we all know that Jane is the perfect match for him. She can drive him crazy with lust and desire without ever inspiring a murderous impulse. She may be a squib, but she's not a dunderhead. A man like Severus would find the intellect and humor that come with matrurity sexier than the the physical attributes of a postpubertal adolescent. Anyway, it didn't seem like Jane was lacking in her physical attributes.

Deeble 2007.06.08 - 09:37PM 22: Gall Signed
Oh dear. Well, he'll do the right thing. Eventually.

NoxSomnium 2007.06.07 - 06:49PM 22: Gall Signed
Who is this Princilla Gash and why be she so smarmy? What grievance? Did I miss it? I have been known to do so. You make me want chocolate.

Author's Response: Princilla appears in Chapter 7, as does Jane for the first time!

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