Reviews for A More Merciful Man
Deeble |
2007.06.23 - 10:09PM |
23: Bloody Mary |
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I love your explanation for Snape's helplessness where Jane is concerned -- not his desire, but hers. It makes perfect sense. |
Carrot top |
2007.06.22 - 07:51PM |
23: Bloody Mary |
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Excellent! I especially liked the ending and I liked that Snape drinks very blood like Bloody Mary's. |
snapescat |
2007.06.22 - 06:19PM |
23: Bloody Mary |
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is that it? did he kill himself? did he disapparate somewhere? after a year of AP english one would think i'd be able to pick up on the subtelties to the end of this.
is this the very end? will there be an epilogue? |
cmwinters |
2007.06.21 - 09:37PM |
22: Gall |
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Wow. . . that could be bad . . . |
snapescat |
2007.06.16 - 02:02AM |
22: Gall |
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what a twist! do post more and soon, please! i haven't read a good fic in a while and too many of my favourites have been abandoned. so i hope you post some more chappys! |
snapescat |
2007.06.16 - 01:34AM |
20: Amortentia |
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i am particularly fond of dumbledore's letter. and quite amused by snape!matchmaker. although i would assume him to be a little more acidic than described here, you kept it all very amusing and he remained fairly snapish throughout it. good job. |
snapescat |
2007.06.15 - 09:49PM |
14: The Waters of Lethe |
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ah! why?! why did he have to obliviate her? *dramatic sigh*
this is very good and she doesn't seem very mary-sue-ish, as many snape love stories tend to include. i commend you.
now i must continue to read.... |
Faraday |
2007.06.14 - 04:52AM |
22: Gall |
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My first review of your story - I'm really enjoying it. The dialogue is wonderful and well-crafted. I look forward to more! |
Trickie Woo |
2007.06.12 - 02:15PM |
22: Gall |
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Thanks for the tip. I reread Chapter 7 and it made what happened in this chapter much easier to figure out. What a terrible match Licius selected for Snape, if he were forced to marry Princilla he would strangle her, if nt AK her soon after the honeymoon began.
But we all know that Jane is the perfect match for him. She can drive him crazy with lust and desire without ever inspiring a murderous impulse. She may be a squib, but she's not a dunderhead. A man like Severus would find the intellect and humor that come with matrurity sexier than the the physical attributes of a postpubertal adolescent. Anyway, it didn't seem like Jane was lacking in her physical attributes. |
Deeble |
2007.06.08 - 09:37PM |
22: Gall |
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Oh dear.
Well, he'll do the right thing. Eventually. |
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