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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

Jimena Graystone 2010.11.21 - 06:46AM 44: Aqua Vitae Signed
This has to be the best thing I've ever read: " These last words were a cry of rage and torment, of some injured animal that had only wanted to retreat to its den to die, but was instead dragged unceremoniously back into the light of day to be healed, all unwilling."

Jimena Graystone 2010.11.21 - 02:37AM 20: Amortentia Signed
That's so funny! Of course Snape had to play matchmaker, he said it himself - everyone in a relationship feels the need to inflict their status on everyone else! lol Because they want everyone else to be as happy as they are! You are a genius! This story is so awesome! And Snape is so how I'd expect in this situation. I don't know how you do it!

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.25 - 03:19AM 38: Cosmopolitan Signed
My favorite lines in the whole chapter: "For a moment he was tempted to flee, Apparate somewhere, anywhere, but he realized how that would look. Severus Snape, the right hand of Voldemort, reduced to running away in terror at the thought of a conversation with someone’s mother." They made me laugh out loud! Wonderful, intriguing chapter, not the least because of the way Severus and Eva got to size one another up (and Eva literally so)! Excellently done.

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.20 - 01:33AM 28: Firewhiskey Signed
I was very glad indeed that the psychology between them changed, that Jane's tearful eyes made Severus change. If that had not happened, I would not have liked this chapter, hot sex be damned. It would not be worth seeing a fine woman whose only crime was to love a really neurotic man, be taken and USED like that. His capitulation to HER need was the saving factor, which you knew. Thank you. For that, for the whole chapter; it was very well written.

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.20 - 12:34AM 23: Bloody Mary Signed
Is there such a pub in London as The Black Barrister? I sure would love to go there, if there is! Excellent chapter. I do hope Severus ends up doing the right thing by Jane--and himself!

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.19 - 11:50PM 19: Wolfsbane and Gillywater Signed
Some of the truest words I've ever read: "There is only one thing that a man can do with a woman who wishes to mount him at every available opportunity.” “Let her.” Indeed!

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.19 - 11:10PM 16: First Flush Signed
Wonderful chapter. I loved Severus' feelings of falling, of being on that precipice, with his fingers giving, of his being tired, and there "being nothing for it" but to give in. Lovely stuff! Thank you!

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.19 - 10:50PM 14: The Waters of Lethe Signed
Oh, Severus. That was SO unfair. How disappointed we are in you. I hope you pay for that, you stupid man.

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.19 - 09:11PM 6: The Macallan Signed
Funniest lines I've read all week: "For one brief second, Snape got a powerful image of the ghost of Albus Dumbledore waving his arms in the air, horrified, as a noisome spew of diarrheic werewolf shit sprayed Fawkes. In that moment he also realized he liked Remus J. Lupin entirely too much." Wonderfully funny stuff--excellent chapter, complete with excellent characterizations, too!

Jong_Kahn 2010.08.19 - 08:44PM 2: Elf-made Wine Signed
Snape smoking....ewwww.

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