Reviews for A More Merciful Man
javoher |
2008.02.08 - 01:57AM |
38: Cosmopolitan |
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This is sooo well written, and interesting! Jane is a really cool character, I love hearing her thoughts and seeing how she responds to Snape's snarking and superficial nastiness. Can't wait to see what she does when she finds out about that contract Snape hasn't yet signed. |
moon_muse |
2008.02.07 - 01:53AM |
38: Cosmopolitan |
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I've been very bad about reviewing but I wanted to drop a line to say this is a fantastic story..I really loved mom's appearance in this chapter. I really can't wait to see what he does about that contract offer in the end :) Keep up the great work! |
ard |
2008.02.05 - 01:14PM |
38: Cosmopolitan |
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Love the mom! Have a feelilng she will play an important part in this story. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
alicebs |
2008.02.05 - 03:14AM |
38: Cosmopolitan |
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Lovely interaction between Jane and her mother! I could fully sympathise, somehow. And very good exposition of Snape's motives and Slytherin constraints. You've really made it very difficult for him to get rid of his engagement with Princilla. It is very good writing, as a reader I really cannot know where you will be taking the story, although of course I am rooting for Jane! Thanks for the frequent updates, too. |
Trickie Woo |
2008.02.04 - 10:55PM |
38: Cosmopolitan |
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Wow, her mother is really something! She obviously loves her daughter very much and wants to protect her from harm, but she's almost as Machiavellian about that as Dumbledore was about everything. Her daughter must be the most important thing in the world to her. She protected her in the only way she knew how, so therefore the end justified the means.
She's a fascinating and formidable character, so is Jane in her own way. Severus doesn't stand a chance against them. |
linda0506 |
2008.02.04 - 08:46PM |
38: Cosmopolitan |
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Once again wonderful! |
darkmark111 |
2008.02.03 - 03:32PM |
37: Sea Breeze |
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A very satisfying chapter. I eagerly await the next one. |
MW Waters |
2008.01.29 - 09:32PM |
37: Sea Breeze |
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This is a very enjoyable, well-told tale. Just love your OFC, very believable and likable. Poor Snape doesn't know what's hit him (snigger). |
testingt |
2008.01.29 - 01:52AM |
37: Sea Breeze |
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Well, he keeps trying. Consistency is supposed to be a virtue, I hear. You do write well. |
Trickie Woo |
2008.01.28 - 06:26PM |
37: Sea Breeze |
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He knows now how far gone he is, now it's just a matter of how long he will hold out before he finally gives in to what he feels and tells her he loves her. |
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