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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

Pixy 2008.02.24 - 01:07PM 44: Aqua Vitae Signed
I think he should still kill Bellatrix and the Malfoys. lol!

Pixy 2008.02.24 - 01:06PM 42: Whiskey Sour Signed
I knew something like this was gonna happen. Those damn Malfoys always screwing things up.

Pixy 2008.02.24 - 01:04PM 41: The Green Fairy Signed
Poor Severus. I know exactly how he feels.

Deeble 2008.02.24 - 06:13AM 44: Aqua Vitae Signed
And Severus Snape, who had never been anyone’s darling, even his mother’s -- this so aptly sums up why Snape has been hard-put to deal with this relationship.

I'm glad the story is marked as not finished -- I hope there will be more. It's been so nice to have more Jane and Snape to look forward to all these months, more of your evocative and rich word use. Thank you for this tale.

linda0506 2008.02.23 - 10:43PM 44: Aqua Vitae Signed
Lovely. Thought she was going to die there for a bit. Waiting for the next chapter!

Trickie Woo 2008.02.23 - 10:38PM 44: Aqua Vitae Signed
It wasn't at all romantic, but it was extremely satisfying. He finally figured it out. I still wonder if Eva put a spell on the Whomping Willow to attack Jane and make it look serious, but really only knock her out for a bit. Eva and Gash must have had some involvement to bring it about becase he needed a push and Gash knew it. Will the be an epilogue? I hope so because it will be difficult going without Severus, Jane and this story.

Ellyn 2008.02.23 - 08:35PM 43: Draught of Living Death Signed
Well, I was wrong about Gash having something dark in his closet. I wondered if Eva was Gash's mistress - the wizarding world is rather small, after all. And if Gash is in love with Eva, and if Snape ever realizes that he's stupidly cutting himself off from Jane to hold on to the respect of people he doesn't even like, then maybe there'll be a wedding in the future and Severus will get Jane and a mansion, complements of Roland Gash. The Slytherin purebloods would be put in their places if they saw that Roland Gash wasn't going to withdraw his friendship with Snape if he marries Jane. Snape is a puzzle, isn't he? I knew something had to happen to prevent Snape from signing the contract, but I was thinking that perhaps Princilla would appeal to him during office hours and beg him not to sign the contract. Poor Jane. Of course, she has to pull through. This is a comedy, after all, and comedies always end in weddings, especially between people in love who seem doomed to be separated. Maybe Severus will save the day with a potion or spell that he knows? Maybe Gash will send in the best healers in the world to help her?

celestialrain 2008.02.23 - 06:06AM 43: Draught of Living Death Signed
OMG! Torment, torture! You're really going to leave us hanging like this?? I hope you are writing quickly! LOL! Great job getting Snape out of that silly contract! I just wish he was happier about it!

Deeble 2008.02.23 - 05:46AM 43: Draught of Living Death Signed
I hope for a happy ending for Jane's sake. She deserves it, if Snape does not. (And really, he has learned his lesson, so perhaps he deserves it too.)

Trickie Woo 2008.02.22 - 11:16PM 43: Draught of Living Death Signed
Two chapters at once, I love it. I hope you get the next updated posted soon, I'll be on pins and needles until the cliffie is resolved. We are now in 'An Affair to Remember' territory and I want to see how it all works out. I want it to end up with him back in Jane's arms (and bed). I love seeing Snape as Cary Grant and stay in character, and with Jane he was. Two other authors have managed that feat in Highly Improbable and Squidbait Returns, two of the five best fan fic stories I have read since I became part of the fandom 3 years ago. I've read hundreds of Snape romances since then and I rate this story right up there with those two, and that, indeed, is high praise from me.

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