Reviews for A More Merciful Man
| Jacq_Black |
2020.11.07 - 07:22PM |
39: Black Turncoat |
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| Words cannot describe how incredible your writing is.
My heart feels quite literally torn apart but I’m begging for more.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful work x |
| Nephthys |
2017.02.09 - 10:51PM |
51: Epilogue |
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| Such a beautiful, well-crafted tale. So well written. The command of language throughout is delicious, and the characters - especially this AU Severus Snape - entirely believable and loveable. Humour, angst and PWP done perfectly. This story goes a long way to assuaging the harsh tragedy of his life and death in the novels.
No idea if you'll see this, but - I wish you'd come back and write more stories. Even just vignettes spinning off this one. What are the twins' names? What kind of mischief will they manage to drive Severus mad with paternal angst and unanticipated affection? How do Jane's devotion and forbearance develop over the years? How does their passion for each other combine with their family life? Won't they need bigger quarters and a new place to live? What about a chapter or a story featuring our beloved Potions Master drinking 'Champagne'? We haven't seen that yet. :)
Snape will *always* be fascinating to readers. He's the Byronic (anti)hero of our literary age. I don't think we can get enough good stories, however long it's been since DH was published. |
| Nephthys |
2017.02.09 - 04:23AM |
48: Butterbeer |
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| I've been reading this story years after it was published, and I'm in awe at your talent. This chapter had me both squirming and laughing out loud every other line....To quote Ron, 'A horse a horse my kingdom for a horse!' Couldn't stop laughing by that point. You do right by Severus Snape! I love it. |
| FreeRaven |
2016.02.04 - 07:40PM |
20: Amortentia |
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| best moment ever. I saw it all as if on film. beautiful characterizations here. great dialogue too! a spot on Luna, Harry, and a perfect Snape! |
| Saga Benjamin |
2015.09.07 - 05:49PM |
51: Epilogue |
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| Just finished reading it over the course of a couple weeks. You'll probably never see this comment, but thanks so much for finishing the story. It was lovely, and very well written. You have a wonderful command of the English language, and you're true to your characters. |
| hotstuff |
2013.06.26 - 01:59PM |
51: Epilogue |
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| Love it!! You are Amazing!!! I Hope you Will keep on writingIng! |
| Trueloveskiss |
2013.01.25 - 05:10PM |
23: Bloody Mary |
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| Fantastic! Love that bit at the end! |
| Trueloveskiss |
2013.01.25 - 03:04PM |
19: Wolfsbane and Gillywater |
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| I am really enjoying this story! I can't wait to see their relationship grow! Love your OC! |
| mkwiant |
2012.09.11 - 09:39AM |
51: Epilogue |
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| the best ss/oc story i have ever read |
| mkwiant |
2012.09.10 - 01:43PM |
28: Firewhiskey |
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| OH merciful God but you can write... I laughed I cried..
i absolutely love what a disaster she is on the dance floor.. but the scene between the two of them... a battle of wills.. and his defeat is his victory... i can't wait to read more. Thank you! |
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