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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

Nephthys 2017.02.09 - 10:51PM 51: Epilogue Signed
Such a beautiful, well-crafted tale. So well written. The command of language throughout is delicious, and the characters - especially this AU Severus Snape - entirely believable and loveable. Humour, angst and PWP done perfectly. This story goes a long way to assuaging the harsh tragedy of his life and death in the novels. No idea if you'll see this, but - I wish you'd come back and write more stories. Even just vignettes spinning off this one. What are the twins' names? What kind of mischief will they manage to drive Severus mad with paternal angst and unanticipated affection? How do Jane's devotion and forbearance develop over the years? How does their passion for each other combine with their family life? Won't they need bigger quarters and a new place to live? What about a chapter or a story featuring our beloved Potions Master drinking 'Champagne'? We haven't seen that yet. :) Snape will *always* be fascinating to readers. He's the Byronic (anti)hero of our literary age. I don't think we can get enough good stories, however long it's been since DH was published.

Nephthys 2017.02.09 - 04:23AM 48: Butterbeer Signed
I've been reading this story years after it was published, and I'm in awe at your talent. This chapter had me both squirming and laughing out loud every other line....To quote Ron, 'A horse a horse my kingdom for a horse!' Couldn't stop laughing by that point. You do right by Severus Snape! I love it.

FreeRaven 2016.02.04 - 07:40PM 20: Amortentia Signed
best moment ever. I saw it all as if on film. beautiful characterizations here. great dialogue too! a spot on Luna, Harry, and a perfect Snape!

Saga Benjamin 2015.09.07 - 05:49PM 51: Epilogue Signed
Just finished reading it over the course of a couple weeks. You'll probably never see this comment, but thanks so much for finishing the story. It was lovely, and very well written. You have a wonderful command of the English language, and you're true to your characters.

hotstuff 2013.06.26 - 01:59PM 51: Epilogue Signed
Love it!! You are Amazing!!! I Hope you Will keep on writingIng!

Trueloveskiss 2013.01.25 - 05:10PM 23: Bloody Mary Signed
Fantastic! Love that bit at the end!

Trueloveskiss 2013.01.25 - 03:04PM 19: Wolfsbane and Gillywater Signed
I am really enjoying this story! I can't wait to see their relationship grow! Love your OC!

mkwiant 2012.09.11 - 09:39AM 51: Epilogue Signed
the best ss/oc story i have ever read

mkwiant 2012.09.10 - 01:43PM 28: Firewhiskey Signed
OH merciful God but you can write... I laughed I cried.. i absolutely love what a disaster she is on the dance floor.. but the scene between the two of them... a battle of wills.. and his defeat is his victory... i can't wait to read more. Thank you!

mkwiant 2012.09.10 - 11:08AM 23: Bloody Mary Signed
THe Black Barrister - what an awesome chapter! love the story so far - you are an excellent writer! Thanks for your hard work!

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